WoW!!!! That was an amazing poem you wrote. You really have a way with words, and expressing yourself. I really felt what you were talking about in that poem. How people waste the years, yet wishing it would go by slower to go back and correct the mistakes. Also how people are over come by many issues wanting to give up, but some how find that inner strenght to strive forward. Seem like you have exprienced a lot over the years. Writing is a way to let out your deepest emotions right?? Keep writing because you have talent.
Do you write poems or songs?
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Mayura
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that was great!! ^^ nice to see some stuff here...
one more by me (I know, it doesn't so make sense):
HOLD YOU TIGHT
I always wanted to hold you tight,
Never wanted anybody to fight,
But I notice,
You were right,
Lost at night,
Can窶冲 see the light.
Hoping that you窶冤l find me someday,
Forever I窶冤l be waiting,
So will you please say,
Is there any other way?
one more by me (I know, it doesn't so make sense):
HOLD YOU TIGHT
I always wanted to hold you tight,
Never wanted anybody to fight,
But I notice,
You were right,
Lost at night,
Can窶冲 see the light.
Hoping that you窶冤l find me someday,
Forever I窶冤l be waiting,
So will you please say,
Is there any other way?
TyPe-ZeRo
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- 13 Aug 2003
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thats a good poem Mayura! keep up the good word 
Karri : whos poem/thing are you talking about? they're all so good! everyones done a great job, also you said something about correcting mistakes in the past so this is why i ask you've done VERY good work Karri! Also your in the Japanese Navy? is it hard hard work?
Karri : whos poem/thing are you talking about? they're all so good! everyones done a great job, also you said something about correcting mistakes in the past so this is why i ask
you've done VERY good work Karri! Also your in the Japanese Navy? is it hard hard work?Good job Mayura. That was a good poem that you wrote, and it does make sense. It appears that you are talking about someone you like, and do not want to let that person go. Yet it seems the person has ventured out, and you hope to be reunited with that person someday.
TePy-ZeRo, ask who's poem I last posted. That was mine. I wrote that poem for my ex-girlfriend. Actually, I am an American. I just have the Japanese flay as my country flay since I'm living in Japan at this time. I'm in the U.S. navy stationed here in Yokosuka, Japan
TePy-ZeRo, ask who's poem I last posted. That was mine. I wrote that poem for my ex-girlfriend. Actually, I am an American. I just have the Japanese flay as my country flay since I'm living in Japan at this time. I'm in the U.S. navy stationed here in Yokosuka, Japan
Mayura
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eto... is Karri a girl or a guy? ^^;
it doesn't really have a title... and it's ot finished, but I don't really like the end of it, so I decided not to post it... ^^
Sometimes I wish that I could die,
Maybe than I窶囘 be able to fly,
But all alone, I wonder why,
Now I窶冦 left here, just to cry.
But it窶冱 stupid to do so,
Maybe I should just let go,
All this things that are dear to me,
Than I窶囘 maybe finally see.
it doesn't really have a title... and it's ot finished, but I don't really like the end of it, so I decided not to post it... ^^
Sometimes I wish that I could die,
Maybe than I窶囘 be able to fly,
But all alone, I wonder why,
Now I窶冦 left here, just to cry.
But it窶冱 stupid to do so,
Maybe I should just let go,
All this things that are dear to me,
Than I窶囘 maybe finally see.
Mayura
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- 30 Sep 2003
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Zero - that's good for you, to know what you want to do... (or something like that?)
thank you very much! ^^
ah... I totally forgot to read the posts properly last time... (guess I was in a hurry)
Karri - eto... you know, somehow my poems turn out to be that way, or totally weird... but: "It appears that you are talking about someone you like, and do not want to let that person go. Yet it seems the person has ventured out, and you hope to be reunited with that person someday."
that is most unlikely to happen... ^^
thank you very much! ^^
ah... I totally forgot to read the posts properly last time... (guess I was in a hurry)
Karri - eto... you know, somehow my poems turn out to be that way, or totally weird... but: "It appears that you are talking about someone you like, and do not want to let that person go. Yet it seems the person has ventured out, and you hope to be reunited with that person someday."
that is most unlikely to happen... ^^
Mayura, I am a guy. Yes, my poems that I have been writing lately are about a woman I loved so dearly, and I'll go the distance to just have her here with me right now. I have no idea what happened to her. It's like she just disappeared within the morning mist. Months have pasted, and here it is a new year, and still I sit alone. Alone pondering whatever happened to those glory days. Day by day, my feelings seems to grow even stronger for her, for the meories of her haunts me day and night, night and day. For, I have traveled the world, dated many of woman, and no one has ever come close to my lost love. Each night I pray to the Heaven to reunite us. I pray we will someday be together again, and this time nothing will stand in our way. If not, I shall move on. Move on to a new world and new life, forever having a speacial place for her in my heart.
ELMFOREST LAKE
I am here,
at the lakeside.
At the wateredge,
on the frozen mirror
the broken image.
I am here,
on the dark sand.
In the forest,
the woodpecker
makes his spring nest.
I am here,
my footsteps behind me.
Elmforest ya!
On the piled up light
the summer rain.
I was there
at the lakeside.
The green cathedral,
on the murky waters
the fallen leaves.
Just pondering away in my own little Fangorn forest....
I am here,
at the lakeside.
At the wateredge,
on the frozen mirror
the broken image.
I am here,
on the dark sand.
In the forest,
the woodpecker
makes his spring nest.
I am here,
my footsteps behind me.
Elmforest ya!
On the piled up light
the summer rain.
I was there
at the lakeside.
The green cathedral,
on the murky waters
the fallen leaves.
Just pondering away in my own little Fangorn forest....
Mayura
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That's nice, Ido...
Golgo_13 - yes, I agree with you, Karri's post was like a poetry itself...
Karri - yes, I hope you'll find her someday... really hope so! sorry, I ddin't think you were a girl because of your posts or so... to be honest, I thought your user name sounded more like a girls one... very sorry to have mistaken that...
gosh... the computer I used to work with has broken down... and I've got all my stuff saved on it!! >.<
Golgo_13 - yes, I agree with you, Karri's post was like a poetry itself...
Karri - yes, I hope you'll find her someday... really hope so! sorry, I ddin't think you were a girl because of your posts or so... to be honest, I thought your user name sounded more like a girls one... very sorry to have mistaken that...
gosh... the computer I used to work with has broken down... and I've got all my stuff saved on it!! >.<
Thank you all for your support on finding my lost love. I just hope everything goes well with my search. If not I'll just have to move on.
Mayura, it's okay if you thought I was a female due to my user name. My user name is my real name. Actually it's Jakarri, but I only go by Karri. I was not offened or anything.
Mayura, it's okay if you thought I was a female due to my user name. My user name is my real name. Actually it's Jakarri, but I only go by Karri. I was not offened or anything.
Mayura, it's okay. There's nothing to feel bad about. Some time other people tend to all my Curry like the food Curry Rice that I love to eat. Besides you didn't know if I was a girl are not. My friend his first name is Keri, and so many people thinks he is a girl if they haven't met him before.
DarkDreams
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- 11 Jan 2004
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I write a lot of poetry and a few songs. I have two notebooks full.
DarkDreams
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- 11 Jan 2004
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Sure! ^^
"The Hunt"
Endless tears
Pouring down
Keeping me
From my fears
I try to hide
No where to escape
I try to run
No place to go
The hunt begins
They're after me
The bells toll
Echoing in the nights hour
When will it end?
I try to control my emotions
Making myself harder to find
I see one
My once-lover
He gazes right through me
Maybe I should give in
Just sit down and cry
But then they'd find me
And I'd die
"The Hunt"
Endless tears
Pouring down
Keeping me
From my fears
I try to hide
No where to escape
I try to run
No place to go
The hunt begins
They're after me
The bells toll
Echoing in the nights hour
When will it end?
I try to control my emotions
Making myself harder to find
I see one
My once-lover
He gazes right through me
Maybe I should give in
Just sit down and cry
But then they'd find me
And I'd die
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!! Do a poll! That'd be cool! 
(Like your work, BTW! 
.)Hey, Hey, *raises hand* I write poetry too! I'm on my 4th notebook, it's insane!
(I think I lost one of them though! 
Or maybe I am just not looking hard enough....
)I try to write music, all I get done with is the lyrics, then a couple strings of notes (yep, my technical term for a quarter-done job.
), but, it is really hard to fit, first, the mood of the poem to match the flow of the notes and feel of the notes. Then, to have the lyrics also fit that flow! I applaud everyone here who writes lyrics/music! Such a tough job! Bravo!! 
Golgo_13
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Okay Kuro_Tsubasa ("Black Wings"),
You're on the list. But keep in mind, I'm going to write one (1) poem for all the women who want it, okay? Not each of you getting a separate individual poem.
Capische?
A poll wouldn't be appropriate since it's not about whether I should write one but it's about who wants one. All we need is a sign up sheet. Or I'll just keep track of who is asking for it.
And on Vatentines Day instead of posting the poem here on the forum, I'll send the poem by private massage to each woman who wants one, so she'll feel like she received a poem that was written especially for her.
You're on the list. But keep in mind, I'm going to write one (1) poem for all the women who want it, okay? Not each of you getting a separate individual poem.
Capische?
A poll wouldn't be appropriate since it's not about whether I should write one but it's about who wants one. All we need is a sign up sheet. Or I'll just keep track of who is asking for it.
And on Vatentines Day instead of posting the poem here on the forum, I'll send the poem by private massage to each woman who wants one, so she'll feel like she received a poem that was written especially for her.
