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A better way would be to write something like "Congratulations on your 28th year",
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If you put this year's date on it, it makes it seems like this year is the last and final year your sensei will be participating.
It almost makes it sound like he/she is dying this year.
(But otherwise, yes what you have written is correct).
祝
廿
八
周
年
記
念
If you put this year's date on it, it makes it seems like this year is the last and final year your sensei will be participating.
It almost makes it sound like he/she is dying this year.
(But otherwise, yes what you have written is correct).