Monogatari
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- 28 Jul 2003
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Can anyone explain to me why this joke doesn't work in Japanese? I'd like to retune it to Japanese humor.
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Junen computer kaisha de hataraita ato Tanaka-san wa kaisha wo yameru koto ni shita.
Kare wa shigoto wo yame Okinawa he tatta.
Kare wa soko ga kiniitta. Shinbun mo rajio mo telebi mo nai. Tsuridake. Nante odayaka darou.
Soshite, rokkagetsu go no aru yoru, kare wa darekaga dao wo tataku no wo kiita.
Sokoniwa higewo hayashita ookina sumotori ga tattei ta.
"Akira desu. Konohen no mono desu. Paatii ni sasoi ni kimashita."
Tanaka-san wa omotta, 'Yoshi, gimoto no hito ni au iikikai da'. "Hai! Ikimasu yo."
Akira wa itta, "Iitte okuto…nondakure ga ooinda."
Tanaka wa itta, "Boku wa Tokyo kara kitan desuyo. Nomiya no Mekka ja naidesu."
Akira: "Mou hitotu…yatura kenka wo hazimeru kamoshirenai."
Tanaka: "Tokyo kara kitemasu kara, daijoubu desu. Dou sureba iika wa wakatte masuyo."
Akira: "Mou hitotu…sexu hajimechaukamo shirenaikedo."
Tanaka: "Daijoubu desu. Narete masukara."
Akira: "Jaa, junbi shitekure. Ore wa koko de matuyo."
Tanaka: "Nani wo kiteikeba iideshouka. Aratamatta mono desuka, soretomo kiraku na mono desuka"
Akira: "Nandemo iiyo. Boku ra dake dakara."
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Junen computer kaisha de hataraita ato Tanaka-san wa kaisha wo yameru koto ni shita.
Kare wa shigoto wo yame Okinawa he tatta.
Kare wa soko ga kiniitta. Shinbun mo rajio mo telebi mo nai. Tsuridake. Nante odayaka darou.
Soshite, rokkagetsu go no aru yoru, kare wa darekaga dao wo tataku no wo kiita.
Sokoniwa higewo hayashita ookina sumotori ga tattei ta.
"Akira desu. Konohen no mono desu. Paatii ni sasoi ni kimashita."
Tanaka-san wa omotta, 'Yoshi, gimoto no hito ni au iikikai da'. "Hai! Ikimasu yo."
Akira wa itta, "Iitte okuto…nondakure ga ooinda."
Tanaka wa itta, "Boku wa Tokyo kara kitan desuyo. Nomiya no Mekka ja naidesu."
Akira: "Mou hitotu…yatura kenka wo hazimeru kamoshirenai."
Tanaka: "Tokyo kara kitemasu kara, daijoubu desu. Dou sureba iika wa wakatte masuyo."
Akira: "Mou hitotu…sexu hajimechaukamo shirenaikedo."
Tanaka: "Daijoubu desu. Narete masukara."
Akira: "Jaa, junbi shitekure. Ore wa koko de matuyo."
Tanaka: "Nani wo kiteikeba iideshouka. Aratamatta mono desuka, soretomo kiraku na mono desuka"
Akira: "Nandemo iiyo. Boku ra dake dakara."