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Kouhai
- 24 Feb 2016
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I'm writing a description for a Fiverr gig which includes proofreading and sprucing up CVs and it goes like this:
Today's job market is a tough one. More and more people have access to higher education while employers flip through dozens of impressive resumes... and the one that catches their eye is the most articulate one.
I understand that this request is ridiculous, but listening to Engrish all day long for the past year and a half has seriously messed up my sentence patterns. I need to know if the part "and the one that catches their eye is the most articulate one" makes sense and if there is any other way to restructure it and emphasize the "articulate" even more.
I appreciate the help.
Today's job market is a tough one. More and more people have access to higher education while employers flip through dozens of impressive resumes... and the one that catches their eye is the most articulate one.
I understand that this request is ridiculous, but listening to Engrish all day long for the past year and a half has seriously messed up my sentence patterns. I need to know if the part "and the one that catches their eye is the most articulate one" makes sense and if there is any other way to restructure it and emphasize the "articulate" even more.
I appreciate the help.