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Dear native English speakers,
Would you correct my sentences if needed?
1 When Mike was eleven years old, he went to London.
2 When you are free, help me.
3 Nancy was having lunch when I visited her. / Nancy was having lunch when I came to visit her.
4 I was washing my car when Tom visited me. / I was washing my car when Tom came to visit me.
5 It was snowing when I got up this morning.
6 When we visited the town/city, they were high school students.
7 Come to my house when you are free.
8 When I visited the school, the boys were playing soccer.
9 I met him when he came to Osaka.
10 When I was twelve years old, my father came back from Canada.
11 When I arrived at the station, it was raining. / It was raining when I arrived at the station.
12 I was eating/having dinner when Nancy called/rang me.
13 I went to this school when I was a child.
14 Ring/Call me when you arrive at the station.
Hirashin
Would you correct my sentences if needed?
1 When Mike was eleven years old, he went to London.
2 When you are free, help me.
3 Nancy was having lunch when I visited her. / Nancy was having lunch when I came to visit her.
4 I was washing my car when Tom visited me. / I was washing my car when Tom came to visit me.
5 It was snowing when I got up this morning.
6 When we visited the town/city, they were high school students.
7 Come to my house when you are free.
8 When I visited the school, the boys were playing soccer.
9 I met him when he came to Osaka.
10 When I was twelve years old, my father came back from Canada.
11 When I arrived at the station, it was raining. / It was raining when I arrived at the station.
12 I was eating/having dinner when Nancy called/rang me.
13 I went to this school when I was a child.
14 Ring/Call me when you arrive at the station.
Hirashin