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Dear native English speakers
Would you help me?
A Japanese student wrote:
My coffee that you move it on the desk was delicious.
I don't think this sentence is good. I suppose there are a lot of mistakes in it.
How would you correct it?
Would this sound OK?
My coffee that you moved onto the desk was delicious.
Hirashin
Would you help me?
A Japanese student wrote:
My coffee that you move it on the desk was delicious.
I don't think this sentence is good. I suppose there are a lot of mistakes in it.
How would you correct it?
Would this sound OK?
My coffee that you moved onto the desk was delicious.
Hirashin