Can anybody write in Japanese?

[whis4ey]

Do you know if my Japanese lettering for 'Fujiyama' is good enough before I carve?
Sam

 

[Johnathan]

I think you may have an error or two towards the top of the first Kanji.

 

[Johnathan]

Here's one a bit cleaner.

 

[whis4ey]

The little bit of elaboration was meant simply as decorative. You think it is not a good idea then?
Your own final image is very clear
Thanks
Sam

 

[Maciamo]

Just a little detail ; Japanese say "Fujisan" rather than Fujiyama. That works for all mountain names. Just the "on" reading, instead of "kun" reading.

富士山

 

[mdchachi]

Elaboration is fine but that extra dab in the middle definitely looks odd.

Perhaps something like this would be better:

 

[whis4ey]

Brilliant
Thanks Jonathan
I removed the 'dab' in the middle
Sam

 

[whis4ey]

Sorry
Not Jonathan on this occasion
Thanks mdchachi
Sam

 

[whis4ey]

This is the finished result

Sam