How is my handwriting?

[AlexThJester]

I'm really worried that I'm learning to write all wrong because I only have textbooks to go off of, not actual handwritten words or someone to actually show me. Here are my only samples.

 

[Mike Cash]

Some you need to work on more are か、き、ゆ

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[AlexThJester]

Some you need to work on more are か、き、ゆ

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Thank you! ^^ Does this look any better?

 

[Mike Cash]

It's an improvement, yes. Hang in there.

 

[Toritoribe]

I'm really worried that I'm learning to write all wrong because I only have textbooks to go off of, not actual handwritten words or someone to actually show me. Here are my only samples.

Hiragana を and katakana モ and ヤ are wrong.
Notice that;
を: The direction of the last stroke is opposite.
モ: The vertical line doesn't cross over the upper horizontal line.
ヤ: Unlike hiragana や, the slash line crossing over the horizontal line is just one.

I wonder why you learned them in the order あえいおう, not the most common one あいうえお. The order あえいおう is indeed used, but usually it's for vocal exercise mostly for actors.

 

[AlexThJester]

Hiragana を and katakana モ and ヤ are wrong.
Notice that;
を: The direction of the last stroke is opposite.
モ: The vertical line doesn't cross over the upper horizontal line.
ヤ: Unlike hiragana や, the slash line crossing over the horizontal line is just one.

I wonder why you learned them in the order あえいおう, not the most common one あいうえお. The order あえいおう is indeed used, but usually it's for vocal exercise mostly for actors.

Thank you for your input! I see those mistakes now. This was one of my practice exercises to learn kana so in aware there may be small issues. Thank you for pointing them out.

I write them that way because of the English aeiou thing since I only have flash cards so it was just how I memorized it.