- 8 Apr 2004
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Dear native English speakers,
would you correct my sentences if needed?
1 I'm no longer young. I can't join your program.
2 To do voluntary work is being encouraged by many companies.
3 As a result, more children have been able to attend school regularly.
4 You should take a gift to your host family. (gift = 贈り物)
5 More students are motivated to go on to college.
6 The proportion of Chinese people who eat beef has risen recently.
7 We encouraged the students to study math more.
8 China is no longer a developing country.
9 TFT does more than provide them with nutritious meals.
10 They had to prepare a meal to take to school.
11Many students realize the joy of learning.
12 More students have attended classes regularly.
13a As a result, the proportion of literate students has risen rapidly.
13b The proportion of literate students has risen rapidly as a result.
14 After brushing their teeth, they went to bed.
15 The players are motivated to practice harder.
16 As he can speak English, he has a lot of foreign friends.
Thanks in advance.
Hirashin
would you correct my sentences if needed?
1 I'm no longer young. I can't join your program.
2 To do voluntary work is being encouraged by many companies.
3 As a result, more children have been able to attend school regularly.
4 You should take a gift to your host family. (gift = 贈り物)
5 More students are motivated to go on to college.
6 The proportion of Chinese people who eat beef has risen recently.
7 We encouraged the students to study math more.
8 China is no longer a developing country.
9 TFT does more than provide them with nutritious meals.
10 They had to prepare a meal to take to school.
11Many students realize the joy of learning.
12 More students have attended classes regularly.
13a As a result, the proportion of literate students has risen rapidly.
13b The proportion of literate students has risen rapidly as a result.
14 After brushing their teeth, they went to bed.
15 The players are motivated to practice harder.
16 As he can speak English, he has a lot of foreign friends.
Thanks in advance.
Hirashin