Japanese sentence Structures

[EvilLugiaXD]

I am having trouble with getting my sentences correct in japanese. I keep using the wrong noun, verbs, and etc.
わたしはたいようのでです。。。 (I am the rising sun...)
よるはノーモアです ( the night no more)

 

[Glenn]

私は旭日昇天（きょくじつしょうてん）です。
消失（しょうしつ）する夜（よる）

I'm totally guessing here; I just wanted to give it a shot. Anyway, uh... I'd suggest picking more everyday and less poetic types of words and doing what you can with those to get the basic sentence structure. 太郎（たろう）が来（き）た may be a bit too boring, but it's pretty transparent in its structure. Of course, there are all sorts of issues about when to use pronouns, but I guess when you're starting out it's OK to use わたしは when you're talking about yourself. But, 知子（ともこ）は背（せ）が高（たか）い or 魚（さかな）は水（みず）に住（す）む may be good to work with. ライオンは百獣（ひゃくじゅう）の王（おう）だ, etc.

 

[Elizabeth]

I am having trouble with getting my sentences correct in japanese. I keep using the wrong noun, verbs, and etc.
わたしはたいようのでです。。。 (I am the rising sun...)
よるはノーモアです ( the night no more)

たいようので doesn't make sense.
Rising sun = 昇る太陽 (not used for people).

 

[Glenn]

Yeah, I think she was shooting for 日の出 (ひので).

 

[EvilLugiaXD]

私は旭日昇天（きょくじつしょうてん）です。
消失（しょうしつ）する夜（よる）

I'm totally guessing here; I just wanted to give it a shot. Anyway, uh... I'd suggest picking more everyday and less poetic types of words and doing what you can with those to get the basic sentence structure. 太郎（たろう）が来（き）た may be a bit too boring, but it's pretty transparent in its structure. Of course, there are all sorts of issues about when to use pronouns, but I guess when you're starting out it's OK to use わたしは when you're talking about yourself. But, 知子（ともこ）は背（せ）が高（たか）い or 魚（さかな）は水（みず）に住（す）む may be good to work with. ライオンは百獣（ひゃくじゅう）の王（おう）だ, etc.

How do you use pronouns in Japanese? And could you please explain the difference between poetic words and non-poetic words?

 

[Toritoribe]

How do you use pronouns in Japanese?

Japanese pronouns - Wikipedia

And could you please explain the difference between poetic words and non-poetic words?

Isn't it difficult to explain it in English?

It's hard at least for me, for instance, the difference between 太陽, 旭日, お日様, お天道様, 日輪....

 

[Glenn]

How do you use pronouns in Japanese? And could you please explain the difference between poetic words and non-poetic words?

I suppose more than words it's the phrases, or the wording. Do you not find "I am the rising sun" and "the night no more" to be a bit poetic? At least those are two things I'd never say in a normal, casual conversation.

 

[EvilLugiaXD]

Eh yes. ^^; I was thinking about how poetic would be used in video game play. I thought there would be something different in video games.