Konnichiwa Elizabeth-san!
I talk about only technical topic in Japanese, sorry.:note:
These are the two I came up with. I know for sure A is grammatical, can you also say it the second way?
A. 「たとえ(必ずしも)日本があまり知的な国でないとして
も、人々はとても親切です。」
B. 「たとえ必ずしも日本があまり知的な国でもなければ、
人々はとても親切です。」
And which (or another) is softer and therefore more natural ?
At first, you can not say B. Because this sentence has a mistake in grammar. If you use "...でもなければ", the following is a negative sentence "...でもない" invariably. And usually "...でもなければ...でもない" is not used in the subjunctive mood.
If you use "...でもなければ" in the sentence,
「日本はあまり知的な国でもなければ、
人々はまったく親切でもない。」
This sentence means "Japan isn't an intellectual country. Moreover, the people are not kind at all".
WOW
I never want to make a Japanese friends!
Sentence A is perfect in grammar. But this sentence is not natural.
At first, you should not use "necessarily" and "still" in Japanese sentence. Those modifiers make the meaning of a sentence weak and vagueness.
And you should use "Karini" but not "Tatoe" in this case. Both of them means "even if", "Karini" and "Tatoe". But "Tatoe" means "instance" or "comparison" too.
C. 「たとえ日本が知的な国でないとしても、
人々はとても親切です。」
This sentence means "Even if Japan isn't an intellectual country, the people are very kind.", "Japan is not an intellectual country comparatively, but the people are very kind." or "An instance, Japan is not an intellectual country. But the people are very kind.".
WOW, Japan is not an intellectual country!
But if you use "Karini" but not "Tatoe", it means only "Even if Japan isn't an intellectual country, the people are very kind.".
D. 「仮に日本が知的な国でないとしても、
人々はとても親切です。」
D is natural.
NANGI