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Can anybody write in Japanese?

whis4ey

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Do you know if my Japanese lettering for 'Fujiyama' is good enough before I carve?
Sam
 
I think you may have an error or two towards the top of the first Kanji.
 

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Here's one a bit cleaner.
 

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The little bit of elaboration was meant simply as decorative. You think it is not a good idea then?
Your own final image is very clear
Thanks
Sam
 
Just a little detail ; Japanese say "Fujisan" rather than Fujiyama. That works for all mountain names. Just the "on" reading, instead of "kun" reading.

富士山
 
Elaboration is fine but that extra dab in the middle definitely looks odd.

Perhaps something like this would be better:
 
Brilliant
Thanks Jonathan
I removed the 'dab' in the middle
Sam
 
Sorry
Not Jonathan on this occasion
Thanks mdchachi
Sam
 
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