A merry J-rocker christmas story!

Huh? You mean am I trying to insult your writing or something? If that's the case, nope. But there is better stuff, better plot, better writing (and don't take that as an insult!), and all those nice other stuff
 
hahah yeah:-) i was just fooling around

perhaps we should create another one :-) cause there is nothing wrong with you're writing, it's great.
 
We need a new era .. !

I would love to add something but it has gotten too long and I'm too lazy to read it all and catch up with you guys :p !

Maybe we should start a new one sometime . Only with a different type of story , like:


Gackt wakes upon a day to find Hyde lying by his side..

Gackt: Gnaa!!!

Haido:..u..ahh .. Ohayou Gozaimasu Gackt san..

Gackt: H-Haido!! What are you doing in my bed ?!!!!

Haido: ...hmm..?? Are you ok honey ?? I'll make you some coffee..

Gackt still caught by surprize watchs Haido as he gets up , lifting the bed cover to reveal he was only in his underwear. Gackt watches in blush as Haido covers himself with the bed sheet. And moves outta the room..

Gackt: W-Wai.. wait ....

Gackt : (what's going on here , all I can remember is I have went to bed yesterday , ALONE. How did haido end up here ?? What was he doing in my bed ?? What were .. we doing ..?!!!)

Gackt sat on that still warm bed confused just before he heard Haido from across the room .

Haido: Hooooneey!! Would you like eggs for breakfast or steak ??

Gackt: S-StOP!!
Gackt in anger rushes towards the kitcken of where Haido obviously was . On his way there he mumbles to himself.

Gackt: Haido , what are you trying to do ?? Have you not been able to accept my rejection to you ?!!! Have you lost your mi/ ...uhh ??
Before Gackt could make it to the kitchen he was faced by ...

Gackt: Mana ???!!

Mana: ... daddy ...

Gackt : !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mana: Daddy .. tie my ribbons ...

Haido: Mana honey , what do we say ??

Mana: Pleaaaaaaaaassse..

Haido: Good girl , Gackt dear go help our daughter prepare for school.

Gackt's head filled to almost exploded. Gackt takes in a big breath , then lets it slowly out .

Gackt:"...Ok , I"

Mana: interrupts "Daddy !! Hurry !!"

the little girl pulls her daddy from his sleeve up to her room.

Daddy .. honey .. daughter .. mana .. haido .. what's going on here ..?!!


(Authors comment: huh! I am interesting myself 👍 !!)
 
that's pretty good, but I just wanted to the other story to continue...we can't end it that way..I wanna know what happens..the reason I haven't added anything in is because I've never really done fanfiction and I was sure if you were taking this in a certain direction..I didn't wanna interfere...either way I like both stories, but I wanna know what happens next in the first one..
 
Ok . I hereby end my story and refrain anyone from posting a completion to it .


Please ingnore the post and get back into whatever you guys were doing ..
 
But that one IS kind of interesting...You could write it and post it somewhere where it can be posted, ne.

That and I've got writer's block.

And the thing with these kind of things is that the plot keeps on changing in a way. One person posts something, the next posts something else whether it was the way the author wanted it to go or not.

That happened a lot with me; Nightwalker kept making poor, wittle Miyavi EVIL!, even though I was trying to steer it away, ne.
 
so, should we continue?
perhaps we should come up with some rules, so the story won't go trail of in a weird way.
 
that's agood idea..then you guys can continue with the story ^^..yay!!..I was inspired to go look for more fanfics and I've been reading those...mostly yaoi stuff..lol ^^
 
Yeah and if it helps, see the links on my siggy? Both of those lead to the Gakuhai community where there's, like more than 200 Gakuhai fics (some of mine are there too! xD)
 
:-) might obey?!? how dare you :-)

okay here are the rules :
1. no graphic yoai, kissing and such is okay but no hardcore. :-)
2. all the people how want be part in this story have to vote a match like gackt and hyde or something in this store or for a few matches. so people know with matches there are and we can't get confused.This must be put on the first page of the story.
3.all scenes must be written(look at my early edit on this threat). i also discribed the evening, a least a bit. so we now what happens even then.

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rule number 3 is the least important!

hope the rules are some good 😌
 
gackt just smiled at kyo and continued with his work. 'that look, i know that look. this isn't gonna be good. If gackt and hyde really said too each other what he taught the did than there was going too be war in this house soon.' he tought and left the kitchen as soon as he could, leaving gackt with a grin on his face. "he knows" he mumbled too himself. 'but i don't care, if hyde is really the one then i will embrace my faith and be weak untill our love can make me strong again.'

"did you missed me?" miyavi yelled when he heard someone enter the living room. Damn those stupid wounds still hurted him.
Too his suprise kyo ignored his question and walked over to him with a stunned face.
"we have too talk miyavi" he said coldly and took a seat next too him. "talk?" miyavi asked totally confussed. 'last evening gackt had lost controll over himself and had beat him up real bad, choosing the side of hyde since he seemed to have a weakness for that guy after all. He had almost lost his life, at those hands and got saved by the one that he always picked on. What was happening here?'
"it's about gackt.."
tough it seemed too take a lot of kyo too get his story out, miyavi wished he could hurry up, he was missing his favorite show!
kyo desprately searched in is head what words too use but only found confussion, it had been too much for him. "are you okay kyo?" miyavi asked and waved his hand for the little man's eyes. Kyo snapped out of his toughts in a schock. "yeah, i guess so" he answerd. "i got an idea, i'll be right back" and with that miyavi jumped from the couche and looking back one time to the television and ran too his room.
He began to search in his drawers."yes, i got it!" he yelled in joy and ran over too kyo.'i hope this works, otherwise i'm going to kick some serious gackt butt. but then again i won't be in this situation again' he tought and looked at the bruises on his body."it still hurts" he quoted in a female voice and got his smile back.
"what's all this noise?" hyde intterupted his sprint. Miyavi took his time to take in hyde. His black hair was perfectly in style as were his black tight pants and his white t-shirt. But his gutt told him that something was missing.

And here ends my part of the story :-) i don't know if i wrote the story in the right direction if not then i'm sorry and you could change it 😌 . also, the story might but the j-rockers in a bad light, there a bit weak in this story, but hopefully as the story goes on this might change :p
 
(That's a new story right...? xDD Just answer me that and I'll continue it, ne!)
 
advigilo said:
:-) might obey?!? how dare you :-)

okay here are the rules :
1. no graphic yoai, kissing and such is okay but no hardcore. :-)
2. all the people how want be part in this story have to vote a match like gackt and hyde or something in this store or for a few matches. so people know with matches there are and we can't get confused.This must be put on the first page of the story.
3.all scenes must be written(look at my early edit on this threat). i also discribed the evening, a least a bit. so we now what happens even then.

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rule number 3 is the least important!



hope the rules are some good 😌

oh come on!!...how come no hardcore..I mean we've come to expect it the way the story has been going..it doesn't have to be too harcore, but come on!..we want action!!..lol ^^..and as for the post above I believe that it continues the original story..its not a new one..
 
no, its some of the old story.
what do you think of my rules?
you may begin the story
 
please let there be yaoi in the story...we need some action!!..pretty please with chibi jrockers on top :( :( :( :( :(
 
Camui I can see you are only 14. You represent all the reasons yaoi should not be included .. :eek:


Enjoy your childhood as you can .. really .. *feels corrupted*
 
Err...What ARE you talking about? Yaoi, even hardcore yaoi, does not corrupt people.

I should, errr, know! Yeah! xD
 
there's nothing wrong with yaoi..that's not corrupting.. :( :( :( :( :(
 
corrupting? no, its just that i dont know if its allowed in this forum. and i dont wanna find out, what i mean is that i dont know if there gonna remove this thread if it is not allowed. but when is someone gonna start?😭
 
I'll try to find out whether its allowed or not cuz I don't want them to remove this thread..plus I want this story to be really, really good ^^ :-)
 
A story can be good, even without yaoi.

-GASP!- Yes, I know. Scary thought there, huh...?

And, again, it confuses me...-whines-
 
can we please continue the story now....I was hoping you guys would continues it while I was gone, but now I've come back to find you've seem to have forgotten about it..is anyone interested in continuing the story?...cuz I wanna kow what happends next ^^
 
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