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Second attempt on Japanese

Janet Merai

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一年過ごしたから私の最後ためたます。
One year has passed since I last tried.

日本語の練習:
Japanese practice:

皆さん、こんにちは!
私は日本語に良いでも、たくさんへいきます。
だけど、私は練習と勉強の日本語で毎日ます。
Hello everyone!
I am good in Japanese, but I have a lot to go.
However, I study and practice Japanese everyday.

自分文典は猶が進境を入ります。
My grammar needs a lot of improvement.

そして、皆さんは元気ですか
Also, is everyone doing fine?
 
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ジャネットさん、こんにちは。 Hi Janet.
日本語に再挑戦ですか? Are you trying to learn Japanese for the 2nd time?
がんばってくださいね。

If you wish to learn how to use words/phrases in Japanese, I'd recommend you to write what you meant to say in English as well, so that you'll get corrections and suggestions from other members.
 
いいえ、このは自分な二つの試すで持つを会話です。
No, this is my second time holding a conversation.

I added English to the first post too.

とまれ、あなたの名前は何ですが、ユーザ名前はあなたの行き付けの名前ですか
Anyway, what is your name, is the username your preferred name?
 
はじめまして、ジャネット。
日本語文法は複雑ですね。教科書を持っていますか? (Japanese grammar is complicated, isn't it. Do you have a textbook?)

1: 一年過ごしたから私の最後ためたます。
To say "from" "since" something has occurred, you should put から after the event. e.g. 一年過ごしたから is "since I have spent one year"/"after spending one year"/"because I have spent one year"
最後 is "the last" as in "this is the final one"
過ぎる・過ごす are a intransitive/transitive verb pair. 過ぎる (intransitive) is better to use for "time passing", 過ごす (transitive) is better for "I spent time (in a place, for example)".
by ためたますyou probably meant 試します?

"The previous attempt":
前の挑戦 (挑戦 as suggested by undrentideさん)
alternative: 前の試し
my full suggestion for "one year has passed since I last tried":
前の挑戦から一年が過ぎました。

2. 私は日本語に良いでも、たくさんえいきます。
XXにいい form often means "good for something"
これは健康にいいです。 "this is good for your health"
by たくさんえいきます is it possible you meant たくさん へ 行きます?
The particle へ is pronounced え but written へ

3. だけど、私は練習と勉強の日本語で毎日ます。
You cannot say something like 毎日ます.
毎日 = every day. It is not a verb.
Maybe something like:
(私は)毎日日本語を勉強しています。

4. 自分文典は猶が進境を入ります。
A 文典 is a type of book. Like "an Old English grammar". (典 is a kanji often used in word for reference books like dictionaries/encyclopedias)
文法 is "grammar" as in "Japanese grammar is difficult".
I am not sure what this sentence is supposed to mean. You are going to (want to) improve your grammar?

I think you need to start with simpler sentences. If you are not sure how to form a sentence (e.g. what grammar to use), then you need to look at a textbook or grammar guide (there are some things online), not just guess. You also need to be careful about idioms. In English we say "hold a conversation". But the equivalent Japanese is probably just 会話をする
In general the first word you find in the dictionary is not always the right one!
 
Are you using any sort of textbook? Preferably one with lots of drills?

I don't intend to sound mean or discouraging, but your post was so loaded with errors it is hard to know where to begin correcting in a manner that would be most useful to you. You seem to have missed/skipped a lot of the basics (which is what prompted the question about your learning materials).
 
Thank you for the help there :3

I do not have any textbooks, infact I have Human Japanese on the iPhone :3
Though I do plan to keep studying Japanese grammar... one little problem is that I do not learn quickly but slowly.
However I make up for it by catching on quickly :3

I will use simple sentences though :3

マイクカシューさん、あなたは何年が日本語を勉強していましたか
Mike Cash, how many years have you been studying Japanese?
 
1)
Cash: キャッシュ
cashew (nut): カシュー(ナッツ)

2)
The subject of the sentence is not "(how) many years" but "you," so the particle が isn't used here.
http://www.guidetojapanese.org/learn...particlesintro

3)
勉強していましたか is used for the case that the person once studied and now doesn't.


マイクキャッシュさん、あなたは何年(間)日本語を勉強していますか
 
ジャネットさん、マイクさんのコメントで怒らないでください。彼は本当に大変な質問を聞きますばかり。
Janet try not to take offense by Mike's statement. He is asking a legit question.

ところでマイクさんは日本語がペラペラです。
And for reference Mike is well versed in Japanese.

頑張って下さい。
 
急にまた勉強したくなったので始めましたか?

Did you start studying again because you suddenly wanted to learn ?


1年前、勉強したときよりも頭に良く入ってくると いいですね。

I hope it comes easier for you than last time. But do get a reputable, well structured hard copy text book...
 
ありがとうございますイリズベスさん :3
Thank you very much Elizabeth :3

勉強で日本語のテゥトをしています。
I will study Japanese Textbooks.

ありがとうでアドバイスイリズベスさん。
Thank you for the advice Elizabeth.

And it has been a while as life kept me busy lol
 
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