Is this written by a native Japanese?

winguk · 25 Dec 2012

Hi,

I just got the following from a translation agency. Can anyone tell if it's written by a native Japanese? Or if it's good enough? Any help would be very much appreciated. Many thanks.

現在、初心者向け上品質3Dプロジェクター（例： Acer製 H5360）をたった500 US$でお買い求め頂けます。おそらくもう200US$ほどでグラフィックカード、シャッター3D眼鏡、プロジェクタースクリーンがお買い求め頂けるでしょう。プロジェクタースクリーンのサイズによって、90インチから120インチの3Dテレビと同等の画像をお楽しみ頂けます。1280×720のHD高解像度を持つAcer製のH5360は人間の目には十二分です。もちろん、より高い効果を得るために、より高価なシステムをお選び頂くことも可能です。

Toritoribe · 25 Dec 2012

That's quite well-written, but would not be written by a native Japanese speaker. Some parts, e.g., たった, おそらく, によって sound unnatural to me. I would never use 人間の目には十二分です for a business document.

winguk · 25 Dec 2012

@ Toritoribe

Thanks Toritoribe. The agency promised me to use a native Japanese translator. When you said "unnatural", would a Japanese find it difficult to read or understand?

Toritoribe · 25 Dec 2012

No. I can completely understand what it says. That's just unnatural, so it also can be considered that it's written by a native who isn't familiar with business documents. (If my subordinates submit it to me, I would refuse to receive it, though.)

winguk · 25 Dec 2012

Toritoribe. Thank you so much for your advice

Is this written by a native Japanese?

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