Is it correct?

[eglukas]

Hey!
Can you check this phrase? Is it correct?

It should be " I control my destiny"
Thanks a million !

 

[Toritoribe]

It seems that the writer just wrote specious characters/letters. S/He must not be familiar with kanji nor kana.

 

[eglukas]

But are the structure and symbols right?

 

[Toritoribe]

Frankly, no, it's not. I, a native Japanese, can't recognize the characters except the third one. It would be a kana を. (And the first one seems to be intended as a kanji 運.)

 

[eglukas]

I found this phase here
Japanese Tattoo Designs By Master Calligrapher Eri Takase

but I noticed that some styles of writing are bizarre...

 

[Toritoribe]

Where did you actually get the calligraphy? I mean, is it REALLY the original the artist wrote? You can see the correct kana す(the last one) in this page. The kana in your picture has unnecessary cracks that was probably added to protect the copyright, as same as the characters in the linked page above.