I need help with a song translation

[rosava45]

Hello
I've recently heard this song 真天地開闢集団 -「死神] and tried to translate it. Could somebody check and correct my mistakes, please? I'm not sure if I got it right...


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[TD]倦(あぐ)み続けて 匙(さじ)を投げる
桃源郷は嘘のまま
常 隙間から こちらを覗き込む何かが
生きる罪を詰(なじ)った

綽々(しゃくしゃく)と戯(たわ)る神の遊具
擦り切れた躰 引きずって
縋りつく脚は 死神だ

いつだって いつだって 乗り越えてきた
壊れかけた日々も 未だ見ぬ明日へと
声を 声を 紡いできた
生きようと 生きようと…

白妙(しろたえ)の月 霍乱(かくらん)を呼び
走馬灯を泳ぐ中
延いては四肢を 雁字搦(がんじがら)めに縛り付けて
右肩に手を乗せた

ドクドクと刻む 仏痛と
蝕んでゆく毒に倒れ
微笑んだ神は 死神だ

消え去って 消え去って この世界から
崩れ落ちる空に 手を伸ばし叫んだ
声が 声が 枯れゆくまで 足宛くんだ
生きようと 生きようと…

不慈悲な世に堕とされて 不条理に手を下され

眩しすぎる朝日に 裏切りを嘆いた
雀羅(じゃくら)に掛かる火の鳥の 夥(おびただ)しい数の冤罪を
無邪気に捌く君(かみ)は何故 誰に捌かれる事もなく

いつだって いつだって 乗り越えてきた
壊れかけた日々も 未だ見ぬ明日へと
それでも それでも まだここに生きている

消え去って 消え去って この世界から
崩れ落ちる空に 手を伸ばし叫んだ
声が 声が 枯れゆくまで 足宛くんだ
生きようと 生きようと…[/TD]
[TD]I'm tired, I give up
There is still no Paradise on the Earth
That thing that is always peeking at me through the crack
Is full of the living sins

I'm a plaything of the leisurely playing Gods
I'm dragging my worn out body
On the unsteady legs, I'm a shinigami (縋りつく脚 not sure about this at all)

I've always, I've always prevailed
Even at the days that are about to break, to the still unseen tomorrow
My voice, my voice - I've been strengthening it (紡いできた - the literal translation is spinning, I've gone through some other examples, and reached the conclusion that is about making the voice stronger, but I'm not sure)
I'm going to live, I'm going to live

White Moon calls for the sunstroke (霍乱 is a sunstroke, not sure why it calls for it, though Google Translate also gives me 'a riot')
While swimming in the revolving lantern
In turn it tied my hands and legs
And put its hand on my right shoulder (Again, I'm not sure about who and where was tied or put)

The pain is pounding
I'm collapsing because of the corroding poison
I smiled, I'm the god that is called shinigami

To disappear, disappear, from this world
I reached out my hand to the crumbling sky and shouted
Until my voice withers away (足宛くんだ - not sure what this means)
I'm going to live, I'm going to live

I've fallen into a merciless world and was handed to the absurdity
In the too bright morning sun, I lamented this betrayal (My assumption that he is like fallen angel was thrown into this world owned by absurdity and considers it a betrayal )
Why it should be you and nobody else
Who deals with the false accusations of the phoenix caught in the sparrow net? (I've tried to make sense of this but I frankly don't know)

I've always, I've always prevailed
Even at the days that are about to break, to the still unseen tomorrow
Even so, even so, I'm still alive here

To disappear, disappear, from this world
I reached out my hand to the crumbling sky and shouted
Until my voice withers away
I'm going to live, I'm going to live[/TD]
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[IronDove]

i cant translate but you have good taste. this song slaps

 

[rosava45]

I've found an answer for this part
声を紡ぐ
「声を紡ぐ」は声を出して話しをしているのでしょう。