Helping with making letters into Japanese

Hello there,
I seriously need some help because I'm stuck with making letters.
I'm seriously bad at making letters in Japanese.
Now I got a small issue here and I would like to get as many help as I can.
I got to do for Japanese evening class a small task.
It's actually a Role-playing game that we have to do as homework.
I must make a letter and it has to goes a little bit like this:
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Dear *Annelies/san-dono/sama? / collegue*
My student *Hiroki* has informed me that you got a small funny problem during your stage in Japan about the word MoMo.
As you know Momo has various meanings:
百:hundred
ヒャク ビャク もも
HYAKU, BYAKU, momo
桃: peach tree
トウ もも
TOU, momo
股: thigh, crotch, yarn, strand
コ また もも
KO, mata, momo
腿:thigh, femur
タイ もも
TAI, momo
I hope I could help you with this explanation.
With greetings of the home teacher of *Hiroki* *Fujiawara*san.
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This is the basic letter so now I have several questions:
1) What is the japanese kanji for collegue?
2) What is the best word to approach/address someone in a letter?
3) How do you say : [My student *Hiroki* has informed me that you got a small funny problem during your stage in Japan about the word MoMo.
As you know Momo has various meanings] in Japanese?
4) How would you translate this in Japanese [I hope I could help you with this explanation.
With greetings of the home teacher of *Hiroki* *Fujiawara*san]

I deeply thank those who wish to help me with this because I really need it. It is for points in evening class.

I was thinking of this:

Keigu （敬具） / Kashiko（かしこ） anneleen（アンイリン）/annelies（アンエリス）

私の学生宥貴はあなたの面白い小さい問題について私に 話しました。 言葉「momo」本当にいくつかの意味を持つ. 私はあなたがあなたに若干の例を与えることを望みます。

百
ヒャク ビャク もも
HYAKU, BYAKU, momo

桃:
トウ もも
TOU, momo

股
コ また もも
KO, mata, momo

腿
タイ もも
TAI, momo

and for an ending I would used this ==>
私はこれが助けになることを希望します。

敬具, 藤原。

Is my example correct? or are there huge mistakes in here?

Please help? someone?

Erm well I'm still a beginner so I can just help you with the collegue kanji = 同僚 (どうりょう)
Thats all I can do for now, sorry

Jericho Desu said:

Erm well I'm still a beginner so I can just help you with the collegue kanji = 同僚 (どうりょう)
Thats all I can do for now, sorry

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Doryo (douryou)

Okay thanks for the help! Any help is welcome!!

Is it okay to address someone in a letter with 同僚 ?

Gosh !! No one helped but Jericho Desu !
I hope i can help but >.< i am very begginer lol and i really want to send a Tegami to a japanese friend ^^

For letter-writing itself, you can search for useful articles like this one. A far more in-depth look can be found in the book Writing Letters in Japanese

Any specific content, and you need to concentrate on practicing the basics.

Hezam said:

Gosh !! No one helped but Jericho Desu !
I hope i can help but >.< i am very begginer lol and i really want to send a Tegami to a japanese friend ^^

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Forum Rules: Do not post your homework/school-type questions here! :sorry:

Those questions are for you to work out, so that you will learn from the experience. It is OK to ask for hints, but not for entire solutions. Besides it is simply not efficient for us to try to help people who are not willing to help themselves by demonstrating they have put thought and effort into arriving at a translation before seeking help. You are not entitled to anything. You aren't, after all, paying for the service.

Elizabeth said:

Forum Rules: Do not post your homework/school-type questions here! :sorry:

Those questions are for you to work out, so that you will learn from the experience. It is OK to ask for hints, but not for entire solutions. Besides it is simply not efficient for us to try to help people who are not willing to help themselves by demonstrating they have put thought and effort into arriving at a translation before seeking help. You are not entitled to anything. You aren't, after all, paying for the service.

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Hey I did try my best or am I mistaken? What kind of nonsense is this? There is like nobody here who wants to say this or that is wrong.. The only one who helped me was Jericho So can someone give me a hint or a direction because i'm quite stuck here

Oh ! sorry
Thanks Elizabeth,it's clear now ^^