Help with a couple of sentences

[Sleepless]

Basically I need a few sentences checked for correct usage of particles. My japanese is bad, so go easy on me. Appreciated

1.

I can understand japanese, but I cannot speak it

私は日本語分かりますでも話しません。

2.

What are you going to do this weekend? I'm gonna sleep (the whole time) Really? How Boring! You have no sense of adventure

此れ土日何をしますに幾きますか。私はずっ寝ます。 本当ですか。何て詰らない！ 貴方は観念の大冒険が� りません。

3.

I want to give a present to everyone

私は皆が頂戴物を呉れます。


4.

Shut up! I dont want sound while I am sleeping.

うるさう！ 私は音が求めたくない間に寝っています！ <------ I screwed this one up a lot.

 

[nice gaijin]

Just wondering, how have you been studying Japanese?

1. I can understand japanese, but I cannot speak it
one sentence: 私は日本語が分かりますが、話せません。
two sentences: 私は日本語が分かります。でも、話せません。
でも cannot be used before a comma, and 話せる is the potential form of 話す

2. What are you going to do this weekend? I'm gonna sleep (the whole time) Really? How Boring! You have no sense of adventure
今度の週末どうしますか。
ずっと寝ます。(fine, but the pronoun "I" isn't necessary)
There are many ways to interpret the last sentence, but if I were to use the same words you did, they would have to be in this order:
本当ですか。なんてつまらないんです。あなたには冒険の観念がありませんね。 (this strikes me as awfully rude; if the speakers are using polite forms, they wouldn't say something like this, it's more likely that they'd be friends speaking more casually.)

3. I want to give a present to everyone
(私は)皆さんにプレゼント(or 贈り物 if you don't like gairaigo)があげたいです。
never use くれる when talking about yourself giving a gift to someone else

4. Shut up! I dont want sound while I am sleeping.
うるせぇな！寝るから静かにしろよ。
Direct translation would be "shut up! I'm going to bed so be quiet!" This one seemed especially informal, so I used comparable structures...

 

[undrentide]

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1.

I can understand japanese, but I cannot speak it

私は日本語分かりますでも話しません。

"But" is でも or が.
When connecting two sentence, が is to be used.

私は日本語がわかります。でも話せません。
私は日本語が分かりますが話せません。

～が分かる：is able to understand
話す to speak
話します to speak (polite)
話せる to be able to speak
話せます to be able to speak

2.

What are you going to do this weekend? I'm gonna sleep (the whole time) Really? How Boring! You have no sense of adventure

此れ土日何をしますに幾きますか。私はずっ寝ます。 本当ですか。何て詰らない！ 貴方は観念の大冒険がありません。

これ(normally written in kana, not kanji) is used on its own as pronoun.
When you want to say "this___", it should be この.
There's no future form, so the basic form of verb means either present, or future.
～しに行く does not mean something going to happen, but literally "to go to do ___".
土日 means Saturday and Sunday. Weekend is 週末.

この週末は何をしますか。

All the time is ずっと. If you want to say all day long, you can say 一日中.

私はずっと寝ます。

To emphasize "all the time", you can use ～ている, which is close to present continuous in English.

私はずっと寝ています。

Sense of something is not 観念, it means "concept".
It can be translated in many ways, I might use 心 which means "mind".

あなたには冒険心がありませんね。

One exception is "sense of humour", which is always translated as
ユーモアのセンス.

3.

I want to give a present to everyone

私は皆が頂戴物を呉れます。

want to do ____ : ～したい
to everyone : みんなに

4.

Shut up! I dont want sound while I am sleeping.

うるさう！ 私は音が求めたくない間に寝っています！ <------ I screwed this one up alot.

When you want to make someone quiet, it is
うるさい！
うるさい means noisy, loud.

I don't want ____ ：欲しくない
I don't want sound
Literal translation is 音は欲しくない.
(To make it more natural, you can say I don't want to hear noises:
騒音を聞きたくない)
聞く to hear
～たい to want to [do]
聞きたい to want to hear
聞きたくない negative （～たい＋ない＝たくない）
or
don't want [something] : いらない
音はいらない

while I'm sleeping: 寝ている間は
寝るto sleep
～ている continuous form
→ 寝ている

寝ている間は騒音を聞きたくない
寝ている間は音はいらない

----
haha, I'm late as usual.

Nice gaijin san already gave good explanation, so the above is just for your reference.

 

[Sleepless]

Just wondering, how have you been studying Japanese?

about 3months quite casually.
I only know hiragana/katakana right now, the kanji I wrote is auto converted by a program. I really see their value though, it's so difficult to tell the words apart written in pure hiragana.
PS, thanks for all replies people, it was helpful.

Edit: omg how could I forget the sentences are connected with が not でも. Now I feel like a total fool.