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こんにちは,みんなさん!毎日, 私は 勉強 しました。 私の日本語を成らなかった 思います。。 今,わたしはかなと 漢字を 少し分かります。 でも私も 大丈夫がよんでいます。 (私は)勉強で サイトを 名前「lang 8」 しましたが,わくわくです! 私の日本語大丈夫ですか。。? どもありがとござました! ケビン
 
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Its wrong. It should be: 。でも 私の 日本語を大丈夫ですか。 今それは 正しいですね?
 
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私の日本語は正してください? 私も学生が成ります.
 
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What were you trying to say in English?
 
Well, generally I can understand japanese decent, but my grammar needs major work.the fact you can't understand any of what I said (or tried to, heh) worries me alot. This is what I tried to say, regardless I still believe I've improved, alot from my first time on here years ago.I'm taking a japanese class this summer and can easily understand almost all of my year 1 japanese course.i taught myself through books. I have a friend I speak to also. / hello everyone! yesterday I studied. I thought my japanese is growing... now I understand kana and a little kanji. I'm trying my best. I'm excited because I'm studying through a website called lang 8. Is my japanese okay? Thanks, kevin
 
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What Toritoribe is asking is what you meant to say by

こんにちは,みんなさん!毎日, 私は 勉強 しました。 私の日本語を成らなかった 思います。。 今,わたしはかなと 漢字を 少し分かります。 でも私も 大丈夫がよんでいます。 (私は)勉強で サイトを 名前「lang 8」 しましたが,わくわくです! 私の日本語大丈夫ですか。。? どもありがとござました! ケビン

and

私の日本語は正してください? 私も学生が成ります.

in English. Some parts of your text does not make sense and we need to know what you wanted to say in English, so that we can give you correct answer.
 
Kevin, if you're not getting the grammar then it is going to be impossible to create sentences that make any sense. Just improving kana, kanji, and vocabulary is useless without being able to understand and correctly use the rules of grammar to put them together. It's like thinking your math skills are improving because you have learned all the numbers, even though you don't understand what + or - or = means.

Many students take grammar very lightly and think it isn't very important. I think that is partly because in very low level classes (such as first year Japanese), it is possible to figure out most of what you see and hear from the vocabulary, even if you don't understand the grammar of how the words are fit together into sentences. The problem is that you can't do that for very long. As things get more advanced, just guessing what is going on from recognizing some of the vocabulary leads to more misunderstanding than understanding.

You need to go back and review the grammar stuff again. Particularly the use of 窶堙ー, which you use in places where it isn't appropriate (you overuse it).
 
Mike, I was hoping you would reply. Grammar is very hard, but having always been in special ed english, english grammar was also hard. I think I know what you mean, correct me if I'm wrong but, as you get more advanced, more things are implied...it seems alot more based on context and grammical basis..? Ive read kims grammar guide alot, I'll keep drilling in the grammer. For some odd reason though, I tested into honors english easily for my entrance exam. I'm starting college this summer. There are some non native teachers. I'm not biased but concerned of inaccurate pronounciation. I'm planning on becoming fluet one day like you mike. I've always been very determined but self study has been hard. I know a handful of kanji and all kana. I can speak/pronounce well, but can't write. I bought japanese for busy people 1 (ALTHOUGH, I don't work and study many hours a day now.) Kana version. Mike, I have kims grammar guide pdf on my phone. I read it on the go. I also notice to my dismay my japanese corrected. People can understand it most of the time but always the grammer is wrong.Maybe I can't think of translating or making sentences so literally. I can't really compare them. It's like apples and oranges. It seems like the grammar lit , is often different from the natural meaning. I like that kims guide uses kana and kanji. It makes me do work and this helps me learn. For example, this sentence: The department store is open from 5 until 8.
デパートは10時から8までです。 Lit. As for the department store, its (open) from 10:00 until 8:00. And yet the whole beauty of it is open is implied; its not even in the sentence! In my opinion, this is what makes it so beautiful: the simplicity based on context. I think this is why it is so hard also for some non natives to learn. Correct me if I'm wrong mike. Thanks again. Do you know of any good printed grammer guides? I'm typing this on my phone. I need to get internet. Thanks mike!
 
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That sentence should be: デパート は5時から8時までです。
 
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Well you CAN guess the meaning of some sentences if you do know the Kanjis, but only some. If the sentence is complicated then it is impossible.
 
If possible, Kevin, instead of a grammar guide try to use a textbook that has lots of drills you can do. You need to have the grammar points presented to you one at a time, in a sensible order, and have a chance to practice using them over and over again before going on to the next thing.
 
I have japanese for busy people. It has grammer exercises.thanks mike
 
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Then, your exercises are not enough yet. Indeed デパートは10時から8までです implies a verb, but that sentence is perfectly grammatically correct unlike yours.

こんにちは, みんなさん!
こんにちは、みなさん

毎日, 私は 勉強 しました。
日私は(日本語を)勉強しました。

私の日本語を成らなかった 思います。
私の日本語はうまくなっていると思います。

今,わたしはかなと 漢字を 少し分かります。
今、わたしはかなと、漢字少し分かります。

でも私も 大丈夫がよんでいます。
私は最善を尽くしています

(私は)勉強で サイトを 名前「lang 8」 しましたが,わくわくです!
I think this structure is too advanced for you yet.

私の日本語大丈夫ですか。。?
私の日本語は間違っていませんか

どもありがとござました!
もありがとござました

今それは 正しいですね?
これで合っていますか

私の日本語は正してください?
私の日本語を直してください。

私も学生が成ります.
 
Well it only has about15 exercises through 3 chapter. Also it really doesn't cover grammar well. focuses more on vocabulary and speaking. And I already bought number 2 for future studies...damn. I want genki but I cant afford it right now. I'm studying japanese 1 in school this summer. I want to be prepared also I want to study for fun. I love kims study guide but I wish It had more practice exercises. they seem to end after lesson 1. do you know of any good online sources for grammar? Thanks
 
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