Could someone please proof-read my paper?

[WillisTron]

The paper is a brief summary of me, and then in the second half about my friend. I was told there were errors, but I can't seem to find them, it would mean the world to me if someone were to proof-read it for me and help me to correct the mistakes.
It's due tomorrow, please assist me, it would mean a lot to me! Thank you!


わたしはアリクスです。ノーステキサスだいがくのがくせえです。せんこはFilmです 。いまさんえんせいです。にじゅういちです。あなしん ぶんよみます。ぜんせんてりびおみません。おんがくき きます。わたしのともだちジョダニです。ノーステキサスだいがくのがくせえです。せんこはMusicで ｷ。まいばんかれはテニスをします。

 

[Rei Yahya]

I'm also an aspiring student, let me try and translate to see what I (think) you're getting across?

My name is Alex. I'm a college student in North Texas. I'm majoring in Film. (???) I'm 21. (???) I don't watch TV at all. I listen to music. My friend is Jordan. He is a college student in North Texas. His major is music. He plays Tennis every night.

I am not qualified to critique, but there are a few things I do know for sure:
がくせえ ー＞ がくせい. Better yet, you could just say 'college student'. だいがくせい. The long 'e' is spelled in hiragana with い, not え. Ree れい Mee めい. Does that make sense?

 

[WillisTron]

Yea I know the e sound is made longer with i, and the o sound is made longer with u, was just a mistake I guess... but you read it correctly!
Again though, if anyone else can help with corrections, it would be greatly appreciated!

 

[Mike Cash]

アレックス
さんねんせい

 

[Rei Yahya]

Are you a first year student in Japanese? にほんごでいちねんせいですか？まだかんじをつかいませんか？

 

[undrentide]

わたしはアリクスです。 アレックスis more commonly used for Alex.
ノーステキサスだいがくのがくせえです。 がくせい
せんこはFilmです。 せんこう えいが
いまさんえんせいです。 さんねんせい
にじゅういちです。
あな しんぶんよみます。 「あな」？ What is it supposed to mean? しんぶんを
ぜんせんてりびおみません。 テレビを
おんがくききます。 おんがくをききます。
わたしのともだちジョダニです。 ともだちの ジョダニ Jo-Danny? If it is Jordan, then it's ジョーダン.
ノーステキサスだいがくのがくせえです。 がくせい
せんこはMusicです。 せんこう おんがく
まいばんかれはテニスをします。

 

[Mike Cash]

I think あな was meant to be あさ.