Corrections

[Kuro-Neko]

I'm writing my first essay in Japanese and since I don't
know too much yet it's very basic so I was wondering if
anyone could proof read it for me and tell me my mistakes
if you are interested please let me know and I will send it to
you.

 

[Erdbeerbox]

How about just posting it here? ^_^

 

[Kuro-Neko]

I don't know how to <_<

 

[Erdbeerbox]

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I don't know how to <_<

Copy and paste?