Reunite (A song written by me)

[Pavel123]

That's a song written by me. PLEASE leave comments! Hope you like it!

Reunite

Every day, in the sorrow,
I think of you and about tomorrow,
But everytime i dream of you,
I start to cry and just miss you.

And i tried to remember,
The things we promised to each other,
And in that time, we will meet again,
I will see you smiling in the rain.

Chorus:

And then, our hearts will reunite,
And baby, i miss you tonight,
I just think about you, every day and night,
And we'll share our dreams and will be so tight.

I met you in the bar, away,
And from that day, It took me away,
I was thinking of you and dreaming,
That we meet again and start kissing.

Chorus:

And then, our hearts will reunite,
And baby, i miss you tonight,
I just think about you, every day and night,
And we'll share our dreams and will be so tight.


And the, our hearts will reunite,
And baby, i miss you tonight,
I just think about you, every day and night,
And we'll share our dreams and will be so tight.

 

[Mars Man]

It is fairly good....of course the music would make the difference. There are few places where the pattern or rhyme jerks a little, but the over all meaning, emotion and imagery is good. I can pick some random memories that fit some of it...and in every song that really sells, there has to be some abitlity to relate to it...so,....that's a good point.

 

[Skullcrushergurl]

Lol so cute....Like MM-san said, the music would make the difference and it seems so short but the lyrics are cute.