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How do I say "I want to be free"?

Watashi ......-tai jiyyu.

Wat shud I add in front of "-tai"? And, is the sentence correct? Pls help me to correct it. Domo.
 
How do I say "I want to be free"?

Watashi ......-tai jiyyu.

Wat shud I add in front of "-tai"? And, is the sentence correct? Pls help me to correct it. Domo.

If you are already free, and want to stay free,
watashi wa jiyuu de itai. ~de iru = to be in a state of ~ + tai (want to)

If you are not free and want to become free,
watashi wa jiyuu ni naritai. ~ni naru = to become ~ + tai (want to)
 
Thanx a lot for the clear explaination!

Can I lengthen the sentence when I already ended the phrase as -tai? Which means add a few verbs after the phrase.
 
Watashi wa jiyuu ni naritakute "kotsuboe" kaze.

Is this correct? I'm trying to say "I want to be free just like the wind.". Now the sentence I juz built above is really getting strange. Plz help me. Thanks!
 
Watashi wa jiyuu ni naritakute "kotsuboe" kaze.

Is this correct? I'm trying to say "I want to be free just like the wind.". Now the sentence I juz built above is really getting strange. Plz help me. Thanks!

Hmmm what do you mean with "kotsuboe"???

Anyway, "just like the wind" can be translated as "kaze no you ni" ~ no you ni means "like ~".
I cannot think of good translation for the word "just" - maybe "tada"?
Whether it fits or not depends on the context.

Watashi wa kazeno you ni jiyuu ni naritai.
I want to be free like the wind.
 
kotsuboe is wat I found from the dictionary for "like". Nvm. Thanks a lot for correcting my sentence. Arigato gozaimasu!
 
Is there a spacing between "kaze" and "no"?

Watashi wa kaze no you ni jiyuu ni naritai.

or

Watashi wa kazeno you ni jiyuu ni naritai.
 
Tada is "merely as" or "only like."
Just like I think should be "全く。。。のよう" "まるで。。。のよう。。"
 
Elizabeth;460991 said:
Tada is "merely as" or "only like."
Just like I think should be "全く。。。のよう" "まるで。。。のよう。。"
Thank you Elizabeth san for your nice follow up.
I agree that "just like the wind" can be translated as まるで風のよう(に).
But when "I want to be free" is added,
(私は)まるで風のようになりたい does not sound right to me....
Same about まったく.
 
Thanks a lot for the explaination. I'm happy with the sentence even the 'just' is omitted.

Anyway, can anyone help me with this?

Is there a spacing between "kaze" and "no"?
Watashi wa kaze no you ni jiyuu ni naritai.
or
Watashi wa kazeno you ni jiyuu ni naritai.
Domo.
 
It may be because it comes out as if it were "thoroughly/completely/entirely like the wind," or "I want to be free (to act) as if I were the wind"

koruru;460998 said:
Thanks a lot for the explanation. I'm happy with the sentence even the 'just' is omitted.
Anyway, can anyone help me with this?
Domo.
They are two words so 'Kaze no you' is correct. But no worries, we can understand either perfectly!
 
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Anyway, "just like the wind" can be translated as "kaze no you ni" ~ no you ni means "like ~".
I cannot think of good translation for the word "just" - maybe "tada"?
風と同じように / 'kaze to onaji you ni' would fit 'just like the wind'.
 
Thanks Elizabeth, Supervin.
But I'm still not really convinced about "just".

Could you please explain what is the difference between these sentences?
"I want to be free like the wind"
"I want to be free just like the wind"

To me either sounds 風のように自由になりたい
then what nuance would "just" add...?
 
Thanks to Elizabeth for helping me to clarify my doubt. =)
 
... what nuance would "just" add...?
Two purposes:

a) 'Just like' increases the extent of similarity and exactness. 'Like' is merely similar.

b) Using 'just like' gives more focus on the object of comparison, i.e. the wind. It also shifts emphasis of the sentence to the end.

This was why I wrote 風と同じように for 'just like the wind'. If it were 'like the wind', it would be 風のように.
 
風と同じように is more akin to "similar to the wind" in my opinion.

"Just like" also has a yearning, childlike quality and wistfulness to it that is absent with simply "like." これも子供に話しかけているような使い方ですね。Wow, you want to be just like the wind ???
 
How to say 'my room'?

Watashi no ......

I found 'yutori', 'kutsurogi', 'ru-mu', 'yoyuu', 'kuuseki', 'heya', 'ma' from the dictionary but which one to use? I only know 'ru-mu' is the loan word for 'room' and not sure about the rest. Pls guide me. Thanks!
 
How much did you pay for this dictionary ? One that doesn't clarify the context of each entry isn't worth the paper it is written on in my opinion. If you're serious about learning, junk it and find something decent.

These all have utterly different meanings in Japanese. Not to mention the more obvious terms for room were left out.

To answer the question, though, "heya" is what fits the bill here.
 
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