Please mark my sentences

[Dante17]

Need some help here to make sure I'm learning correctly.

1. Asa okite, nani wo shimasuka?

2. Kinou, ie ni kaette nani wo shimashita ka?

3. Kodomo no toki, yoku benkyou shumashita ka?

My answers:

1. Watashi wa okite, fuku wo kimasu.

2. Watashi wa benkyou shimashita.

3. Hai. Yoku benkyou shimashita.

Or

Watashi no Kodomo no toki ni yoku benkyou shimashita.

Which one of these last two would be best?


Thanks!

 

[Toritoribe]

1. Fuku wo kimasu.

2. Benkyou shimashita.

3. Hai.

Your answers are too repetitive.

 

[JinaRupert]

Even i was hoping for the reply. Thanks for the information.

 

[Ahwii]

On a different note:

I advice you to get used to using boku (or ore, but that can sound a bit rude or harsh in some situations) instead of watashi, as a guy. I know that there are a lot of teachers and books/apps that don't think that's necessary. But, while Japanese understand that foreigners make mistakes, it will sound funny and people may remark, or take you less seriously. I've friend who've had a hard time unlearning, so try to get used to it from the beginning!

 

[Toritoribe]

えーっと、失礼ですが、実社会で（つまり友達同士ではなく）「私」と「僕」がどういう使い分けをされているのか本当にご存じの上でのアドバイスなのでしょうか？

 

[Ahwii]

使い分けは知っておると思いますが・・・
日本人に習った通り、友達また目上の人の話の通りには男性が「私」を使うことは３０・４０代以下の人は使いません。
もしかしてそういう話なんですか？

 

[Toritoribe]

英語で大丈夫です。残念ながら意味が伝わり切れていませんから。

指摘した点は、私（「わたし」あるいは「わたくし」）は性別年齢にかかわらず公式な場面で使われるもっとも一般的な一人称代名詞だということです。