Need a translation for these 4 lines. (Japanese ROMAJI please)

[LuCas23332]

1) Chiisu Ooshiro
2) 17 years old.
3) I stand by to abide with sky.
4) And to become a guardian!

New revised#2:
1) Chiisu Ooshiro *doesn't need translation*
2) Seventeen years old.
3) I am under the sky.
4) I will become a guardian!


Thx! i really mean it
Remember, japanese romaji =P

 

[Tomii515]

There's a word called "please".

 

[JimmySeal]

Unless he edited his post after you posted, he used that word.

 

[undrentide]

The 1st line does not seem to be English... what is it supposed to be?

 

[JimmySeal]

It looks like it already is romaji of some sort. Line 3 doesn't seem much like English either.

 

[Tomii515]

I'm pretty sure it wasn't there when I posted it.
And yeah, #3 makes no sense. He used the infinitive yet they're only one verb and no subject....

 

[LuCas23332]

There I posted the revised version. And yes I already posted "please" when I created the topic, I have not added it in after you posted.
It should be much easier to translate to japanese romaji now. If it still doesn't make sense just translate it into something similar. It doesn't matter to me if this whole script doesn't make sense I just need the translation. Thx!
Please?

 

[JimmySeal]

It seems you don't understand how translation works.

Something has to make sense before it can be translated.

 

[undrentide]

3) I am here with the sky.

You can be with a friend, you can be with a dog, but how can you be with the sky?
I assume it is figurative then to translate it properly, you really have to explain in what context it is, and/or what it is supposed to mean.

4) And to become a guardian!

I want to become a guardian
I have to study to become a guardian

Thought the phrase in the above two sentences look same, they works differently and mean something different.
It looks to be only a small part of speech. You have to explain what idea you want to convey with this short phrase.

Translation does not really work words to words or phrase to phrase, it is an attempt to express the same idea in two different languages who have different words definition, different grammar, etc.
(Even the area from a word from a language covers does not always from that covered by a similar word from another language....)

 

[LuCas23332]

Ok I revised it. Hopefully it is better now. Thx for helping btw.
Japanese romaji, remember =P

 

[Mike Cash]

I'll ask the question everyone else is so 遠慮がち about: What on earth is this for?

 

[Haruspex]

Certainly not for practise.

 

[LuCas23332]

I'll ask the question everyone else is so 遠慮がち about: What on earth is this for?

What does that mean? I can't read japanese lol.. I want japanese romaji if your translating anything.

I still haven't gotten translations.. is the line "seventeen years old" that hard? And other lines too please!

 

[Mike Cash]

Ah, we have the makings of a quid pro quo. Answer my question and I'll answer yours.

 

[LuCas23332]

I can't answer your question if I don't know what your asking, I don't know what those japanese words came from or what they mean.

edit: Oh I also noticed your asking what this is for lol my bad, well this is not a letter or anything lol you will see soon. Its just some project I have to do and I need help on it I can't do it on my own. But yeah japanese romaji translations please.

 

[Elizabeth]

I'm pretty sure it wasn't there when I posted it.
And yeah, #3 makes no sence. He used the infinitive yet they're only one verb and no subject....

"I stand by to abide with (the) sky" to me this makes great sense as part of a traditional/native or sacred legend that the spirit of the dead are at one with the sky (stand by= waiting patiently on this earth to abide with = be a part of eternally).


Seventeen years old = Juushichi (Juunana) sai desu.

I am under the sky = Sora no shita ni imasu. (Literally standing on the ground).

I will become a guardian = Hogosha ni narimasu yo.

 

[LuCas23332]

"I stand by to abide with (the) sky" to me this makes great sense as part of a traditional/native or sacred legend that the spirit of the dead are at one with the sky (stand by= waiting patiently on this earth to abide with = be a part of eternally).


Seventeen years old = Juushichi (Juunana) sai desu.

I am under the sky = Sora no shita ni imasu. (Literally standing on the ground).

I will become a guardian = Hogosha ni narimasu yo.

YAY elizabeth!! thanks =D oh by the way if "i stand by to abide with (the) sky" makes sense, is it possible to have that translated to japanese romaji too?
Thx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

edit: and oh yeah, you are right about the sacred stuff lol thats exactly what form that line is in. cause i see it a lot in animes they use language like that so i got confused when you guys said there cant be translations if that doesnt make sense. I think this line was from the anime "Kaze no Stigma" im not sure, i made the line up myself but soomething tells me i copied it from that anime without knowing it lol.