Manatsu no jouken [真夏の条件」

[LukeSettle]

Hey,
Im trying to translate this song into english but failing horribly.
A little help with this would be great.
the lyrics are
Akai sono kuchibiru de
ore wo uchinuite kure yo
to BABY
Nanimo iwanakute ii
hitome mita toki kara mou, muchuu da
Tonight tokashitai nda kooru, kimi ni haato
Tsurai nigai kurai koi shinjirarenaku nare
Manatsu no fuukei
ao! ao!
kagayaku nagisa yori
Hito natsu no keiken
ao! ao! [i want i want?]
aketai natsu no fasunaa
Manatsu no jouken
sore wa hitotsu dake,
kimi ga iru to iu koto
Manatsu no yo no yume ni wa
gozaiku mo mozaiku mo iranai yo na
Issaigassai wo sutete
ALL FOR YOU sore mo ii na
Fukaku kura-kura shiteru me wo tojita kimi ni
Manatsu no fuukei
ao! ao!
kagayaku nagisa yori
Hito natsu no keiken
ao! ao! [i want i want?]
aketai natsu no fasunaa
Manatsu no jouken
sore wa hitotsu dake,
kimi ga iru to iu koto
Ai wo kojirasete shimatta
ore wo waratte kureru kai?
Tsuki ga ukabu shinya no puuru
oyogidashita kimi ga sasou kara...
tobikonda
Manatsu no fuukei
ao! ao!
kagayaku nagisa yori
Hito natsu no keiken
ao! ao! [i want i want]
aketai natsu no fasunaa
Poro shatsu nugisutete
ao! ao![wow wow]
mayoeru yubi wo awasu
Kimi no subete
ao! ao![i want i want]
aketai kimi no fasunaa
Manatsu no jouken
sore wa hitotsu dake,
kimi ga iru to iu koto
I didnt put it in kana/kanji cause im not certain if the words are correct.
I cant post a link for some reason but the song is called manatsu no jouken and there is a music video on youtube.
I got the akai[red] and sono but kinda lost the sentence structure.
ahahaha well
どうもありがとございますう！
P.s.
if i posted this in the wrong place, i'm very sorry just let me know and ill gladly delete it and repost it in the right place.

 

[epigene]

Hello LukeSettle, welcome to the Nihongo Forum.

As you see in the thread posted here, the forum here is basically for helping each other in learning to study Japanese.

If you need help in translating the lyrics, please give it a try first, and then the members will be most willing to help you give ideas and correct mistakes.

Thanks & have fun learning Japanese!

 

[LukeSettle]

Thank you Epigene!

Yes i will definitely give it a try.

I am still learning the basics of grammar and conjugation and such.

What i got from the first lines was

赤い/ ＲＥＤ
その/ ＴＨＯＳＥ
唇/ ＬＩＰＳ
で/ ＯＮ／ＩＮ

so from that its
on those red lips
and the second line is
俺 を/ I
and then at uchinuite kure yo i lose it.

i know that kure has to be a verb
and that yo adds exclamation but not how "to drill or bore" fits in
hahaha

 

[Kirakira1232]

Uchinuite also means to pierce desu ne.

if the kana/kanji is:

赤いその唇で
俺を打ち抜いてくれよ。

The meaning is something like "Pierce me with those red lips". The "kure" is a much less formal version of kudasai...but I wouldnt know how to really translate it across in this case..

But yeah translation is not really possible relying on the romaji alone...if it is a little beyond your ability right now to translate then maybe when you have more practice with grammar and verb conjugation you can come back to them. But yeah try a little bit at first and people here can help correct you ^^;

Ganbatte kudasai ^^

 

[LukeSettle]

どうもありがとございます！

yeah i figured it was something like that but the kure part makes it all fit!
aahahaha, i definitely would've put it in kanji but i don't know if all the words are correct.

i will!

 

[Toritoribe]

The following might be helpful.

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真夏の条件 by Base Ball Bear

赤いその唇で 俺を撃ち抜いてくれよ Baby
何も言わなくていい ひと目見たときから もう、夢中 だ

Tonight 溶かしたいんだ 凍る、君のハート
つらい苦い暗い恋 信じられなくなれ

※真夏の風景 青々 輝く渚より
ひと夏の経験 I want I want 開けたい夏のファスナー
真夏の条件 それはひとつだけ、君がいるということ※

真夏の夜の夢には 小細工もモザイクもいらないよな

一切合切を捨てて All For You それもいいな
不覚 KURA-KURAしてる 目を閉じた君に

(※くり返し)

愛をこじらせてしまった 俺を笑ってくれるかい?
月が浮かぶ深夜のプール 泳ぎだした君が誘うから…飛び込んだ

真夏の風景 青々 輝く渚より
ひと夏の経験 I want I want 開けたい夏のファスナー
ポロシャツ脱ぎ捨てて wow wow 迷える指を這わす
君のすべて I want I want 開けたい君のファスナー
真夏の条件 それはひとつだけ、君がいるということ

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In this case, 赤いその唇 means 君の赤いその唇

AでBを撃ち抜く: shoot out B with A
e.g. 彼は銃で窓を撃ち抜いた: He shot out the window with the gun.

くれ; the imperative form of the auxiliary verb "くれる"
As Kirakira1232-san explained, "te-form of a verb + くれ" means "do [verb] for me/us".

From all the above, the first line "赤いその唇で 俺を撃ち抜いてくれよ Baby" would be translated to something like,

Shoot me out with your red lips, Baby.


Generally, it's tough to translate lyrics...

 

[LukeSettle]

ah i get it.
ahahaha yes its definitely too advanced for me right now.

thanks for the help 皆さん！