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Japanese help/+ corrections please?

munzy

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Hello,
I would like someone could help me to help/ correct my translation please

2011年ALBUM part1 やALBUM part2 songs part2リリースを
経ての音楽を作る事が 出来て,歌えました!
"I sang ,出来て, " the music I make through the year 2011 released ALBUM part 1" and ALBUM part2" "


かなりいい感じになったので楽しみにしていてください ね!
Please looking forward to it because I have quite good feeling?


1SONG ROMANTICはライブで かなり盛り上がりそうだ... 早くリハーサルにもはいりたい
"1 songs seems quite a climax of Concert Live...?" I want to have also at the rehearsals soon

...の前にまずはlove song part2リリースに向けて準備です!

(here I do not understand the '...の' to put in proper order the tranlsation, -"Im preparting for the release of love songs first of all... (and then the phrase that come above, about the climax?"
.... first before前にまず it's in preparation the release of SONG ROMANTIC


Thanks a lot in advance-
 
2011年ALBUM part1 やALBUM part2 songs part2リリースを
経ての音楽を作る事が 出来て,歌えました!
Are there any typos? Sounds rather awkward, especially リリースを経ての音楽 and 出来て、歌えました.

かなりいい感じになったので楽しみにしていてください ね!
Please look forward to it because I could make it very nice!

1SONG ROMANTICはライブで かなり盛り上がりそうだ
"1SONG ROMANTIC" would be very excited in the live performance.

...の前に is a colloquial way of saying その前に "before that".

Before that, I'm going to prepare for releasing "love song part2"!

Before that, I'm going to prepare for releasing "love song part2"!
 
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