Is this sentence right?

[Tomii515]

Watashi no tomodachi wa watashi o houkousuru (i think 'houkousuru' is wrong!) kara (im not sure if it's dakara or kara)watashi wa kanojo no ie de kanojo o ( i dont know left)

i think this sint right.... please correct if wrong!! thank you!

 

[Tomii515]

hellloo?>??? anyone????

 

[nice gaijin]

what are you trying to say? it seems that your sentence is incomplete.

 

[Tomii515]

My friend yelled/screamed at me because i left her at her house

 

[ralian]

Hi Tomii515, one possible translation would be:
Tomodachi o kanojo no ie ni nokoshite detekitara, donarareta.

 

[Glenn]

hellloo?>??? anyone????

Dude, you need to learn some patience. This post was made only fifteen minutes after the first one. Sometimes it takes a while for people to respond. There may not have even been anyone online who could respond at the time. Fear not -- your thread will be seen, and people will answer. I promise.

 

[cheapshot]

私（わたし）は彼女（かのじょ）の家（いえ）で友達（ともだち）を残した（のこした）から、彼女は私に叫んだ（さけんだ）。

is my best go at it.

 

[Elizabeth]

私（わたし）は彼女（かのじょ）の家（いえ）で友達（ともだち）を残した（のこした）から、彼女は私に叫んだ（さけんだ）。
is my best go at it.

この文では「家で何か起きた = Something happened within/at the house」 ことになりますね。[Left in/at the house] という意味であれば「に残して」あたりが良いでしょうね。
ほかは、ralianさんの訂正をご覧になってくださいね。

 

[cheapshot]

はい。 すみませんでした。

私にとって、「で」と「に」はまだちょっと難しい。

but, practice makes perfect.

ありがとう、Elizabethさん と Ralianさん

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