Hey guys! today I'm not coming with my own request but a request by my relative. She attempted to write this Haiku poem and asked me if I know anyone fluent or near fluent in Japanese who can help her and give her tips to improve so I thought about asking here on this lovely forum. First of all she wanted feedback on her japanese, and secondly her poetry form. Any of them (or both) will be appreciated.
愉快夫婦
柔らかい空
白い花
Thank you everyone for your help
愉快夫婦
柔らかい空
白い花
Thank you everyone for your help