Could you please correct my Japanese

Hello everybody! Could you please correct the following message for me? I'm only a beginner in Japanese and I feel like what I wrote hardly makes sense...

I would be very happy if you could help me to correct this: 皆さん今日が風邪をひかせてしまったのでたくさんの写真をつぶやいたとゴチャゴチャ済みません (シ_ _)シ. にほんごにまちがいがあったら、ごめんなさい。

It is a twitter post. I was very ill today and I have posted many pictures of ill chibis and complained a lot about being ill and feeling bad and other negative things. I wanted to apologize for that.

The message I had in my head was something like: "I want to apologize everyone. Today I have caught a bad cold so I ended up twitting many pictures and complaining a lot. I'm very sorry about that. Also, if I typed something wrongly in Japanese, I would be very happy if you could correct me please"

(I wanted to write the last sentence but I really didn't know how to, so if you could also modify that in my Japanese message, I would be very happy! )

Thank you so much for looking through my message and hopefully you'll be able to help! I want to post it today for my (also Japanese) followers to not be offended and think I'm a bad person or anything so it's very important to me .

Im not as skilled as many of the older posters here, but I'll try to fix anything within my knowledge( I'm interested in learning from anyone else who could eventually post in here too)


皆さん今日は風邪をひいてしまったので たくさんのゴチャゴチャをつぶやいて済みません.

PS: 間違ったところがあるなら、ごめんなさい（日本語がまだ上手じゃない）

(I dont think gomennasai fits well, but I didnt want to repeat sumimasen)
I also changed the ending a bit to (If there is any mistake, please forgive me, I'm not skilled with japanese yet)
I'm counting with a better fix to your original message too. I'm here to learn after all

Well I'll try and see how it goes.

みなさん、今日風邪を引いてしまったから、写真をたくさんつぶやいたり、愚痴ったりしてすみませんでした！

もし私の日本語に間違いがあったら、ご了承願いします。

The last sentence is tricky. Don't know how to say it without being too polite.

I think you may be overthinking things a little bit...

erii said:

Also, if I typed something wrongly in Japanese, I would be very happy if you could correct me please

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I would say (in colloquial expression):
あと、日本語の間違ってるとこ直してもらえるとうれしいです / 助かります。

Thank you for the many replies . It really was helpful and I learned a lot!