I'm also an aspiring student, let me try and translate to see what I (think) you're getting across?
My name is Alex. I'm a college student in North Texas. I'm majoring in Film. (???) I'm 21. (???) I don't watch TV at all. I listen to music. My friend is Jordan. He is a college student in North Texas. His major is music. He plays Tennis every night.
I am not qualified to critique, but there are a few things I do know for sure:
がくせえ ー> がくせい. Better yet, you could just say 'college student'. だいがくせい. The long 'e' is spelled in hiragana with い, not え. Ree れい Mee めい. Does that make sense?