Well done. Here's my tips.
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他の藤波 -->
池の藤波
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You missed the meaning of やらじとや, i.e., やらないために.
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As you might know, あしひきの is the
枕詞 for 山 and doesn't have any meanings. The auther wasn't in a mountain at that time.
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こずる --> こず
ゑ （梢）
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ぬしさだまらね --> ぬしさだまら
ぬ
ぬしさだまらぬ恋せらる more likely means "I have a feeling of love with someone, who is not a specific person".
あぢきなく means "somehow" here.
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～な･･･そ is a structure for "prohibition".
声なきかせそ: Don't sing to me.
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さへ "Even" suggests that the author might not be able to go back to the hometown and meet the people never again.
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思ふのから --> 思ふ
ものから
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韓紅 -->
唐紅
唐紅のふり出でてぞ鳴く expresses the cuckoo sings like dyeing cloth red. It's not about their tongue color.
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昔をのみぞ鳴く -->
音をのみぞ鳴く
Again, あしひきの is a 枕詞.
たれかまさる is not 誰が勝る. That's 誰にも負けない.
