Nice to meet you too, Naza-kun!
I would like to rate your Japanese A+
The only sentence that looks a bit hard to understand is ツ「ニ段ニ旦ナ誰ツ」窶堙ー窶堙遺?堋ク窶堋ッ窶堙ィ窶堙懌?堋キツ。ツ I would say ツ「ニ段ニ旦ナ誰ツ」窶堙??堙ヲ窶堙ア窶堙??堋ュ窶堋セ窶堋ウ窶堋「 instead.
So, Naza-kun, 窶堋ア窶堙ェ窶堋ゥ窶堙ァ窶堋「窶堙≫?堋オ窶堙・窶堙俄?堋ア窶堙姑稚ニ辿ツーニ停ぎ窶堙??y窶堋オ窶堙昶?堙懌?堋オ窶堙・窶堋、窶堙仰。窶堙ヲ窶堙ォ窶堋オ窶堋ュ窶堙仰!