A poem untitled

[Haru-san`sTeiraa]

I wrote this poem,I think I need to work on my poem skills:

Broken down,no walls to save me
believe me when I say I am who I claim to be
My heart is full of love so deep,
I am forever yours to keep
I love you now and will still love you then
Remember me always as I have been

I have written two other poems that I like,i might post them,since I think
they`re worthy...

 

[Blututh]

A master of literature in the making!

I like it, especially lines 3 and 4.