~たい past sentences marking

[Dante17]

Hi there. I have a few sentences using たい that I would really appreciate being marked I that's okay

1) As a child, I wanted to own a dog.

2) As a child, I wanted to eat snacks everyday.

3) As I child, I did not want to ride trains.

4) As a child, I did not want to be a singer.

5. As a child, I wanted to play games.


My answers:


1) こどものとき、いぬがありたかったです。

2) こどものとき、まいにちかしをたべたかったです。

3) こどものとき、でんしゃはのりたくなかったです。

4) こどものとき、かしゅがいたくなかったです。

5) こどものとき、ゲムをしたかったです。


Thank you!

 

[Mike Cash]

For having a dog, the verb is かう (飼う)

Snacks usually has お attached: おかし (お菓子)

Use "become" instead of "be" for the singer: なる (成る).

Game is ゲーム (not ゲム)

 

[Dante17]

Thanks very much Mike