Very Complicated Translation for me

[juudenchan]

ugh hello, to introduce myself im 19 and a big fan of japanese game music pretty much.

I contacted with a game music composer, I wrote in kanji (or as far as I know of kanji xD) but his sentence was rather hard for me to understand since it involved many kanji, and I found it rather complicated (ofc i stressed out) , so I thought I should return a good reply, then I saw this forum and it was like a light in the middle of darkness : D. So im glad I found this forum.

I hope someone will help with this:

I am trying to say in very formal words (in kanji polite form):

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"We would be very glad to see you come to Europe, there are numerous styles of music and instruments that you would probably love to see. We believe it would be very entertaining and wonderful experience in sum to share and learn from your music style."
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the target is a person in their 40's but again not a very old person so Im not sure whats the best way to address.

 

[yasuyuki]

Hello, juudenchan^^
I love japanese game music too.
My favorite composer is Ito kenji.
I wonder who is coming to your country, but anyway, I believe it would be a good experience for you too^^.

私たちはあなたがヨーロッパに来てくれて，本当に嬉しく思っています．
こちらには，あなたがきっと気に入るような音楽のスタイルや楽器がたくさんあります．
また私たちも，今回のあなたの滞在が，あなた自身の音楽のスタイルを私たちと一緒に分かち合えるような，楽しく，また素晴らしい機会になることと信じております．

This is a little English-taste Japanese so not so sophisticated.
(Maybe, you know, this is mainly because of the difference of the article in Japanese and English.)
But I tried to keep the original feelings of your sentence.
I really hope he would be glad^^

 

[juudenchan]

oh wow that looks awesome : D I used a translator to figure out a little bit of what you wrote, though one part I think I might have explained wrong.

I meant the beginning as in : "it would be a wonderful experience if you would come"

he didn't say he will come exactly here, but he said it in that sense:

it went along the lines of:

" ヨーロッパは大好きです。色々と行ってみたいところがありますね。"

then him enouncing it might happen sometime in nearby future that he would visit : )

More in the sense of a welcome, invitation:

"It would be wonderful if you would come to europe in the future, you would have the chance to see many things such as the instruments and the styles present here. Therefore, we really hope you will come here someday soon."

can you plz plz put it more in that sense : ) please and thx very much

(ps: if you want I can tell you by pm who the person in question is)

 

[Glenn]

Sorry for the off-topic, but I'm curious as to why you want him to go to Europe when you're in Canada.

 

[masaegu]

私たちはあなたがヨーロッパに来てくれて，本当に嬉しく思っています．

あの～、まだ行ってないんですけど・・・

ご自身の邦訳の後半とも噛み合っていませんよ。

 

[yasuyuki]

oh wow that looks awesome : D I used a translator to figure out a little bit of what you wrote, though one part I think I might have explained wrong.

Oh, my... I thought that he has already scheduled to come to your country and hold a concert. What a big imagination...
Then I'll mend my translation like this.
ヨーロッパにはたくさんの楽器や独特の音楽のスタイルなど 、見るべきものがたくさんあるので、もしこちらに来て くだされば、きっと楽しんでいただけると思います。
なのでいつかその内に、あなたがこちらに来てくださる ことを、本当に心待ちにしています。
Please check again. You know, we cannot translate keeping the exactly same meanings.
And if you still have some questions about my translation, please don't mind to ask me anytime^^
I am really glad that you love Japanese artists.
PS: Yes. You have to tell me his name as a reward^^ because I am really interested who he is.

 

[juudenchan]

Oh wonderful, ( this time I used romaji translator to figure out the meaning)

I believe from as much as understood that the sentence really fits that spirit. I somehow think I understand it to a large extend by reading and it's really what I implied to say.

Thanks yasuyuki san.