translation correct?

[letianchen]

実は北半球の国の人々が無意識に持っている差別の表れかもしれない。

To be honest, people in countries in the in northern hemisphere are unconscious of things, they might be unaware of such indications of discrimination.

 

[Toritoribe]

北半球の国の人々が無意識に持っている modifies 差別.
The subject is omitted in that sentence. (It must be mentioned in the preceding sentence.)

That(= the omitted subject) might be an indication of discrimination people in northern hemisphere countries unconsciously have.

 

[letianchen]

Wow that is a beautiful translation, thanks alot