Quick translation, kinda poetic

[Karan]

How would I say "Every day, I die a little more inside"

Thanks

 

[Glenn]

日が過ごすほど死が近い。 That's probably not good at all, but I figured I would give it a shot. :sorry:

 

[Karan]

I recognize all but the first kanji... gomen, I should have included, hiragana would be great if possible,

 

[epigene]

How would I say "Every day, I die a little more inside"

Thanks

This is kind of literal. Note that there are many ways to say it, especially when it's poetic:

毎日、私（僕・俺）の中の何かが少しづつ死んでいく。
(Mainichi, watashi (OR boku/ore) no naka no nanika ga sukoshizutsu shinde iku.)

 

[Glenn]

ひが すごすほど しが ちかい。

 

[Elizabeth]

ひが すごすほど ちが ちかい。

何のことでしょうか？

 

[Glenn]

I was just supplying the hiragana for what I posted above.

 

[Elizabeth]

OK, the ち instead of し was just a typo then.
Epigene-san's version does make a lot of sense in retrospect, although I'm still trying to come up with alternatives.

 

[Glenn]

Oops, I didn't even notice that. I'll fix it.