- 8 Apr 2004
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Hello, native English speakers,
Would anyone correct the following sentences if needed?
1. My name is Suzuki Jun-ichi, but my friends call me Jun. My hobbies are listening to music and swimming. I belong to the guitar club and practice in the the audio-visual room after school every day
2. I would like to exchange opinions with you about volunteer activities. I would like to do some volunteer activities for the town where I live. Because I love small children, I would like to take care of them at a day-care center.
My dream is to become a nursery school teacher. So this idea may be good. I'd like you to reply to me writing your opinions about this topic.
Thanks in advance.
Hirashin
Would anyone correct the following sentences if needed?
1. My name is Suzuki Jun-ichi, but my friends call me Jun. My hobbies are listening to music and swimming. I belong to the guitar club and practice in the the audio-visual room after school every day
2. I would like to exchange opinions with you about volunteer activities. I would like to do some volunteer activities for the town where I live. Because I love small children, I would like to take care of them at a day-care center.
My dream is to become a nursery school teacher. So this idea may be good. I'd like you to reply to me writing your opinions about this topic.
Thanks in advance.
Hirashin