Please can someone check this short translation I did

[lv426]

Hi,

I was board one day and decided to add a Japanese section to my website, can someone check over this short paragraph. I'm pretty damn sure there are many, many mistakes.

私は 映画 の ぺーじ を 更新でした、今 私 と ともだち の 映画プロジェクト 見 できる。 そして クリプス と 写真 は 見 できる、この 写真 は 私 の 旅行 日本に です。 この 上 は サンプル です。

ミヂア ペイジ 見 できる、ここ クリク は そこ に 行きます。

The following should mean:
I have updated the movie page, you can now see our movie projects. And you can also see clips and pictures, these pictures are of my trip to Japan. Above are samples.

You can see the media page, click here to go there.

I hope to translate more Japanese, but as you can tell my grammar is very poor. But lol its always helpful to translate stuff, I even picked up a couple words doing these simple sentence

Thanks!

 

[speedy1893]

hello

私は 映画 の ぺーじ を 更新でした、今 私 と ともだち の 映画プロジェクト 見 できる。 そして クリプス と 写真 は 見 できる、この 写真 は 私 の 旅行 日本に です。 この 上 は サンプル です。

ミヂア ペイジ 見 できる、ここ クリク は そこ に 行きます。

The following should mean:
I have updated the movie page, you can now see our movie projects. And you can also see clips and pictures, these pictures are of my trip to Japan. Above are samples.

I applaud you for even trying to learn Japanese! It's a rather complicated language isn't it? Japanese is my first language so I didn't have to learn it the hard way. Now I'm preparing to teach Japanese to my kids (I neglected to talk to them in Japanese when they were babies, well, actually one is only 3 yrs. old and the other is 10 months old, so it's not hopeless). Anyhow, let's look at your translation. As you know, you don't have to use the subject all the time in Japanese. So in this case, I'd write :
映画のページを更新したので、僕たちのプロジェクトが見れます。クリップや写真も見れます。写真は僕が日本に行ったときのものです。

メディアページを見るためにはここをクリックしてください。

I hope this will do.

 

[lv426]

Thankyou so much, the subject always gets me lol. I never know if I'm using it enough or too much, most of the time too much
Anyway its good for me to compare stuff like this to see where I went wrong, lol I always marvel at how well so many gaijin speak english. Yeah japanese is tough, but its fun