do i just find the kanji symbol for 'i' then 'desire' etc and put it in same order as english, if you get me?
From the best of my observation (though with problems because the obvious is omitted), japanese has a distinct clause structure, but it has a few quirks.
Note: Japanese seems to have two types of indirect objects, the place it happens or the place it happens to. The place it happens at will be represented as 1, the one it happens to will be 2.
SUB-ORD-CLAUSE (sometimes only an adv);TIME; "as for (は)"; I-OBJ-1; SBJ; OBJ/I-OBJ-2; ADV; VERB; CONJUNCTION or FEELING PARTICLE;
Remember though, you could always come across a noun phrase modifying a noun or being used as one as well.
It's not just a matter of rearranging the sentence and translating it word by word.
Why are you trying to say this stuff anyways? It makes no sense even in English...
It does in it's own poetic sense, but like many things, that particular poetic feeling method really can't be translated. The closest thing i can think of that will still give the same feeling (without the poetry) would be "（名前）の欲しいものはお上げしますよ。" (I will give you whatever you want [extremly polite].)
all verbs at the end right? ok, but if i were to say 'i can control your feelings as well as eat them!'
"I your feelings can control and can eat." Though, i've never heard of "eating feelings" in english. If you're trying to sway a lady's heart, don't tell her you're going to make her a zombified slave. That just sounds like some kind of sick sounding poem to convince a girl that it's ok to be locked in your basement for your pleasures.