The editing is good, with interesting transitions, but I don't know what this clip is about and the music selection doesn't seem appropriate to the subject matter. Also, your cameraman needs a gimbal; you can only make up for shaky hands so much with slow-motion shots.
What I meant about not knowing what the clip is about... This feels a bit like the mood-establishing montages that move a video from an intro to an on-the-streets interview or an in-place explanation of... something about the area? You're a good editor, but I think your video needs more of a message; what do you want your viewers to learn/take away from the video?