Hey guys! I composed a song for a japanese girl that stayed in my heart and had to go away. I would like to record the song for her, but with japanese lyrics.
I named this song "Touch of Silk". The idea came from a book about a love story in Japan. The main thing I want to say in this song is: "Your love is wonderful, but delicade like sikl. I would like to love you 100 percent, but you always go away, you play with me. When I'm with you, I feel like silk touching me." At the end of the song I conclude "I don't want to push you too hard, cos I could break you."
I don't need all words to be literally translated. It's enough if you keep the metaphor. But please,try to keep the phrase "touch of silk" as clean as possible.
Here are the first verses. I put in parenthesis how many syllables can be in each verse.em Vers sein können.
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Touch of silk, (3,4)
like I never felt before. (7,8)
I could stay here, (3,4)
as nothing mattered anymore. (7,8)
Touch of silk, (3,4)
wonderful and delicate, (7,8)
you touch my skin, (3,4)
you captivate me once again. (7,8)
Anybody would give me a hand?
Thanks and cheers!
I named this song "Touch of Silk". The idea came from a book about a love story in Japan. The main thing I want to say in this song is: "Your love is wonderful, but delicade like sikl. I would like to love you 100 percent, but you always go away, you play with me. When I'm with you, I feel like silk touching me." At the end of the song I conclude "I don't want to push you too hard, cos I could break you."
I don't need all words to be literally translated. It's enough if you keep the metaphor. But please,try to keep the phrase "touch of silk" as clean as possible.
Here are the first verses. I put in parenthesis how many syllables can be in each verse.em Vers sein können.
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Touch of silk, (3,4)
like I never felt before. (7,8)
I could stay here, (3,4)
as nothing mattered anymore. (7,8)
Touch of silk, (3,4)
wonderful and delicate, (7,8)
you touch my skin, (3,4)
you captivate me once again. (7,8)
Anybody would give me a hand?
Thanks and cheers!