Is there any chance somebody could help me out here?
First, I did what you see below.
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I do not think you have been told the full story about what is happening here.
This place is like a commune now, but there is not an equal sharing of the work.
Such dirty floors that except for where I keep my area clean there really is no point in taking off your shoes.
Even if I clean community areas, like the kitchen, it is very soon dirty again because nobody cleans except me.
Walk through the kitchen and my slippers pick up food scraps.
Clean the stairs and in two weeks it is covered with dirt again.
Told by doctors my severe headaches are because of stress. This place must be a big reason.
Just thought you have not heard the full story of this place.
私はここに何が起こるかについての詳しい話を言われた ことを考えない。この場所はコミューンのよう今であるが、仕事の等しい共有がない。私が保 つところきれいな私の区域を除くあなたの靴を脱ぐこと にポイントが実際にないそのような汚れた床。だれも私 を除いてきれいにならないのでIのきれいなコミュニテあ Bエリアが、kitchenのような、それ再度すぐに汚れてい て。台所を通る歩行および私のスリッパは食糧スクラッ プを取る。階段をきれいにすれば2週にそれは土で再度あ ｢われる。医者によって言われて私の厳しい頭痛は圧力あ ﾌためにそうなったものである。 この場所は大きい理由でなければならない。この場所の 詳しい話を聞かなかったことをちょうど考えた。
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Then I was told it would be better to do the online translation one line at a time, so what you see next is the result.
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I do not think you have been told the full story about what is happening here.
私はここに何が起こるかについての詳しい話を言われた ことを考えない。
This place is like a commune now, but there is not an equal sharing of the work.
この場所はコミューンのよう今であるが、仕事の等しい共有がない。
Such dirty floors that except for where I keep my area clean there really is no point in taking off your shoes.
私が保つところきれいな私の区域を除くあなたの靴を脱 ぐことにポイントが実際にないそのような汚れた床。
Even if I clean community areas, like the kitchen, it is very soon dirty again because nobody cleans except me.
だれも私を除いてきれいにならないのでIのきれいなコあ ~ュニティエリアが、台所のような、それ再度すぐに汚あ 黷ﾄいて。
Walk through the kitchen and my slippers pick up food scraps.
台所を通る歩行および私のスリッパは食糧スクラップを 取る。
Clean the stairs and in two weeks it is covered with dirt again.
階段をきれいにすれば2週にそれは土で再度覆われる。
Told by doctors my severe headaches are because of stress. This place must be a big reason.
医者によって言われて私の厳しい頭痛は圧力のためにそ うなったものである。 この場所は大きい理由でなければならない。
Just thought you have not heard the full story of this place.
この場所の詳しい話を聞かなかったことをちょうど考え た。
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So the help I am asking for is which is better? Or are they both just fine? Or are they both useless?
If they are useless, could you point me to a better translation tool, please? Or, even better, can you help correct the mistakes you see?
I would really appreciate the help.
Oh yes, I understand there are certain styles, or degrees, of politeness. This should be at a level appropriate to relaying information to a boss-type person. It's kind of complicated. It's not exactly the boss here in Japan, but it is a higher management person who recruited me.
First, I did what you see below.
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I do not think you have been told the full story about what is happening here.
This place is like a commune now, but there is not an equal sharing of the work.
Such dirty floors that except for where I keep my area clean there really is no point in taking off your shoes.
Even if I clean community areas, like the kitchen, it is very soon dirty again because nobody cleans except me.
Walk through the kitchen and my slippers pick up food scraps.
Clean the stairs and in two weeks it is covered with dirt again.
Told by doctors my severe headaches are because of stress. This place must be a big reason.
Just thought you have not heard the full story of this place.
私はここに何が起こるかについての詳しい話を言われた ことを考えない。この場所はコミューンのよう今であるが、仕事の等しい共有がない。私が保 つところきれいな私の区域を除くあなたの靴を脱ぐこと にポイントが実際にないそのような汚れた床。だれも私 を除いてきれいにならないのでIのきれいなコミュニテあ Bエリアが、kitchenのような、それ再度すぐに汚れてい て。台所を通る歩行および私のスリッパは食糧スクラッ プを取る。階段をきれいにすれば2週にそれは土で再度あ ｢われる。医者によって言われて私の厳しい頭痛は圧力あ ﾌためにそうなったものである。 この場所は大きい理由でなければならない。この場所の 詳しい話を聞かなかったことをちょうど考えた。
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Then I was told it would be better to do the online translation one line at a time, so what you see next is the result.
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I do not think you have been told the full story about what is happening here.
私はここに何が起こるかについての詳しい話を言われた ことを考えない。
This place is like a commune now, but there is not an equal sharing of the work.
この場所はコミューンのよう今であるが、仕事の等しい共有がない。
Such dirty floors that except for where I keep my area clean there really is no point in taking off your shoes.
私が保つところきれいな私の区域を除くあなたの靴を脱 ぐことにポイントが実際にないそのような汚れた床。
Even if I clean community areas, like the kitchen, it is very soon dirty again because nobody cleans except me.
だれも私を除いてきれいにならないのでIのきれいなコあ ~ュニティエリアが、台所のような、それ再度すぐに汚あ 黷ﾄいて。
Walk through the kitchen and my slippers pick up food scraps.
台所を通る歩行および私のスリッパは食糧スクラップを 取る。
Clean the stairs and in two weeks it is covered with dirt again.
階段をきれいにすれば2週にそれは土で再度覆われる。
Told by doctors my severe headaches are because of stress. This place must be a big reason.
医者によって言われて私の厳しい頭痛は圧力のためにそ うなったものである。 この場所は大きい理由でなければならない。
Just thought you have not heard the full story of this place.
この場所の詳しい話を聞かなかったことをちょうど考え た。
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So the help I am asking for is which is better? Or are they both just fine? Or are they both useless?
If they are useless, could you point me to a better translation tool, please? Or, even better, can you help correct the mistakes you see?
I would really appreciate the help.
Oh yes, I understand there are certain styles, or degrees, of politeness. This should be at a level appropriate to relaying information to a boss-type person. It's kind of complicated. It's not exactly the boss here in Japan, but it is a higher management person who recruited me.
