Can someone check these for me?

Razahia · 6 Sep 2014

I have a task in textbook to translate these sentences into Japanese. Yet I have no idea if it's correct or not since I don't have the answer sheet yet.

1.Were you busy last week?

(あなたは先週忙しかったですか)

2. Were you fine last week?

(先週に大丈夫でしたか)

3.Was your high school big?

(あなたの高校は大きかったですか)

4.Was your watch expensive?

(あなたの腕時計はたかかったですか)

5. Is your bag new?

(あなたのバッグは新しいですか)

6.Is your room small?

(あなたの部屋は小さいですか)

7.Is your teacher kind?

(あなたの先生は優しいですか)

It's a bit I know, Thanks to whoever does it.

Mike Cash · 6 Sep 2014

2 isn't in past tense
3 has the wrong kanji for high school

In 4 you used the more polite 〜かったですか style while you mostly used the more abrupt 〜かったか. It would sound better if you did them all the more polite sounding way.

4 use 腕時計 for "watch"

5 use バッグ for that kind of bag. ふくろ is more like "sack".

Razahia · 6 Sep 2014

Edited. Are they alright now?

Mike Cash · 6 Sep 2014

I don't know if I missed it earlier, but 5 shouldn't be past tense.

Razahia · 6 Sep 2014

Mike Cash said:
I don't know if I missed it earlier, but 5 shouldn't be past tense.

Yea edited, No idea why I did it in past tense.

Mike Cash · 6 Sep 2014

Razahia said:
Yea edited, No idea why I did it in past tense.

No problem. Making errors is all part of learning what to watch out for.

Toritoribe · 6 Sep 2014

Razahia said:
1.Were you busy last week?

(あなたは先週忙しかったですか)

2. Were you fine last week?

(先週に大丈夫でしたか)

Is there any reason of the difference?
Also, what do you mean by "fine" in 2, healthy?

Can someone check these for me?

Razahia

先輩

Mike Cash

骨も命も皆此の土地に埋めよう

Razahia

先輩

Mike Cash

骨も命も皆此の土地に埋めよう

Razahia

先輩

Mike Cash

骨も命も皆此の土地に埋めよう

Toritoribe

松葉解禁

Similar threads