A song I wrote

[Haru-san`sTeiraa]

this is a song I wrote,its titled "My Heart"

When you tell me that you love me
my heart accelerates
till the end of time for you
I would surely wait
with you all my doubts just disappear
without you I couldn`t live I fear
I couldn`t in a lifetime find someone like you
someone who would love me just the way you do

When you`re with me,my heart beats so fast
and I know it in my heart that our love will last
my voice gets abit louder when you are around
all the words I want to say simply are not found

When life gets tough
just when I`ve had enough
you`re there by my side,pushing me along
and all I can do to thank you is to sing this song
when you aren`t around,I get so depressed
I know that you want me to try my very best
I will be with you through thick and thin
and I`ll wake up each morning,just to fight again

When you`re with me,my heart beats so fast
and I know it in my heart that our love will last
my voice gets abit louder when you are around
all the words I want to say simply are not found

 

[Ma Cherie]

That's so nice Haru. When did you write this?

 

[Haru-san`sTeiraa]

a couple of days ago....I do my best work late at night....

 

[Mars Man]

I do like that Haru san !! It does bring back old, seldom touched memories of days gone by. . .

I have written a fair number of songs too, and have found that it really goes and comes. As I have gotten older, the words come less and less, it seems. (maybe that's because I'm busier and busier...)

Thanks for sharing.

 

[Kinsao]

That's a good song, Haru. I like it. It's one of those lyrics that is simple but effective.
Wish I could hear a tune for it! :music:

 

[Secret Soliloquy]

It is sweet, and I certainly can relate to it, but it's quite a bit like the english translation of a japanese pop song. You have the basis, you just need to dig deeper for the substance.
Just my opinion, though, which you most certainly do not have to listen to.

 

[Shadow4657]

It a no no

It sucks very much