目覚めろ！野生 song translation proof-read please?

[Janet Merai]

Mezamero Yasei
Used in a Naruto Shippuden ending theme.

空は遥か雲は流れて
遠く遠く遠くに漕がれても
どこを目指して僕は踏み出すのか
- The Sky is stretching so far away, the Clouds stream even further as I paddle on... just where should I go?
迷いを今振り切って
- Shed myself free from indecision.

逃げ場の無い運命でも明日を探して
僕を強くするのは仲間の絆
- There's no escape, friends have a powerful bond, I search for my destiny.
[Chorus:]
目覚めろ！野性
溢れ出した感情
- Wake up!
Let the wildness in you overflow with emotion.
胸に秘めた
我武者羅な笑顔で
叫び声はWhoa whoa
- Keeping my feelings hidden within my heart, with a reckless smile I shout "Whoa whoa."
真実だけに響くだろう
- I'm sure in reality it will be heard far away.
心燃やせ
そして手を繋ごう
夢に込めた 
- We've joined dreams, so my spirit burns with desire.
永遠のお願いを
求めるならWhoa whoa
- I've requested for Immortality, I'll search for it, whoa whoa
探してる光はきっとそこにあるさ
- The searching light will certainly be there.

時がくればそんな言い訳を
何度何度何度切り返すの
眩しそうな目で理想を眺め
隠した気持ちごまかすな
- When the time is right, again, again and again how many excuses will karma bring back in a way it will misinterpret dreams...

怖がってる幻耳を澄まして
君に届けるよこの希望の言葉
- Listen carefully, understand the nightmares and push forward in your own way
目覚めろ！野性
信じたなら進め
道に刻む
迷い無足跡
奇跡を呼べWhoa whoa
- Wake up!
If you want to move on and let life call out, be wild, whoa whoa
闇の世界を灯すように
瞬く流星
追いかけてく起動
その一歩から
全てが始まって
情熱の予\感Whoa whoa
- The world is dimly lit, chase after that burning star, because it all starts with a passionate desire
想像を超えた未来があって
辿り着くさ
- You will achieve a great imagination in the future.

[Repeat Chorus]
Whoa whoa
Woo woo
目覚めろ！野性
- Wake up!
Be wild.

Any suggestions, advice, tips or corrections would be helpful :3
If I get any wrong, don't be afraid to offer solutions :3

 

[Toritoribe]

Quite the same to this thread. For instance, in 逃げ場の無い運命でも明日を探して, the clause 逃げ場の無い is modifying 運命. The subject is searching 明日, not 運命.(That's the function of the particle を.)

Parse the sentences first.;-)