Hey guys,
I'm having some trouble translating and hope you can help.
夢なら夢のままがよかったというほど現実味のないリアルな世界でその星は瞬きする間に消えた.
Those stars disappeared in the blink of an eye in this real world that's so unreal it would be better off as a dream.
I don't think it's a particularly well-written sentence in Japanese..mostly because of 現実味のない and リアルな世界
but the problem with your translation though is that you didn't properly see what ほど is connecting to, actually I don't think you understood how the whole sentence was connected in general, which I don't blame you for
and I actually think 瞬きする間に is referring to a blink of the eye instead of the star, since 瞬きする間 is an idiomatic usage that's often used to mean 'in an instant' or 'in the blink of an eye'
Your 2nd sentence looks OK, though you are right it is a bit confusing
PS I just realized the ほど you tried to translate the sentence as was the ほど which is used in (for example) 安ければ安いほどいい where the
more something is the X it is.
However the ほど in this sentence is closer to くらい in meaning.
For example (I pulled these off google):
新しいものを買いたくなるほど、修理費はバカ高なんでしょう? The repair fees are
so stupidly high
that one would rather buy a new one instead
写真は、行きたくなるほど素晴らしい The pictures are
so awesome
that I want to go there now
我慢できないほど痛い It hurts
so much
that I can't stand it
夢なら夢のままがよかったというほど現実味のないリア ルな世界でその星は瞬きする間に消えた. Those stars disappeared in the blink of an eye in this real world that's
so unreal
that it would be better off as a dream (I omitted some of that in my translation above to make it sound better)
As you can see the nuance is a bit different for this usage of ほど