WonkoTheSane
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- 12 May 2013
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In a past Japanese lesson, we worked on 〜もうVてあります and 〜まだVていません.
Examples from class:
A:コーヒーが 飲みたい。
B:コーヒーは もう テーブルの上に置いてありますよ。
A:ありがとう。
And:
A:明日は 会議です。Bさん、資料は 作ってありますか。
B:あ、すみません。まだ 作っていません。
A: ええっ、大丈夫ですか。
Today I was trying to use the form in an email and this is the sentence I wrote:
僕は沖縄の他の島にまだ行っていません。
For context, I was responding to an email from the other party (native Japanese speaker) who mentioned they had visited Okinawa 's other islands during their visit to Okinawa.
Questions I have:
1. Is the sentence correctly expressing that I have not yet gone to Okinawa's other islands?
2. Is 沖縄の他の島 a correct way of expressing the concept of Okinawa's outlying islands?
In the email to which I was replying, 他の島 was used, so I stuck to that instead of trying to fit 隣 because I figured modeling what a native speaker wrote made sense. However, in hindsight, I think 沖縄の他の島 feels unwieldy and that I was trying too hard to fit 他の島 into an unnatural position with 沖縄の.
I was considering:
僕は沖縄の隣島にまだ行っていません。
3. Would this have worked?
It feels more natural to me, but I don't know.
Thanks!
Examples from class:
A:コーヒーが 飲みたい。
B:コーヒーは もう テーブルの上に置いてありますよ。
A:ありがとう。
And:
A:明日は 会議です。Bさん、資料は 作ってありますか。
B:あ、すみません。まだ 作っていません。
A: ええっ、大丈夫ですか。
Today I was trying to use the form in an email and this is the sentence I wrote:
僕は沖縄の他の島にまだ行っていません。
For context, I was responding to an email from the other party (native Japanese speaker) who mentioned they had visited Okinawa 's other islands during their visit to Okinawa.
Questions I have:
1. Is the sentence correctly expressing that I have not yet gone to Okinawa's other islands?
2. Is 沖縄の他の島 a correct way of expressing the concept of Okinawa's outlying islands?
In the email to which I was replying, 他の島 was used, so I stuck to that instead of trying to fit 隣 because I figured modeling what a native speaker wrote made sense. However, in hindsight, I think 沖縄の他の島 feels unwieldy and that I was trying too hard to fit 他の島 into an unnatural position with 沖縄の.
I was considering:
僕は沖縄の隣島にまだ行っていません。
3. Would this have worked?
It feels more natural to me, but I don't know.
Thanks!